Reviews for In Foreign Lands
LucidNightshade chapter 5 . 5/22/2012
Its really coming along nicely, I am a bit sad I am no longer a co-writer but may I suggest you write a chapter, then Email it to your co-writer for him to aprroved and/or revise perhaps? especially since your no longer living in the same general area?
myrtasi kestrel chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
hehe, be interesting to see if they can put the gameplay into practice. will they have any of the skills of the characters they created i wonder...
myrtasi kestrel chapter 2 . 4/9/2011
lol... waiting to see how they describe where they are from
myrtasi kestrel chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
like yourself just posted my first chapter, your descriptive manner has painted a picture in my mind, be interested to see how it pans out, happy writing
LucidNightshade chapter 2 . 3/3/2011
Its good so far, however the next chapter we need to focus on our... erm... grammer? yea thats it... lots of typos and improperness, now that im not working so much i could put a little more input in
Wehaswallhacks chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
awesome! keep going!