|Reviews for Catnapped|
| Som1-Random chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Ok, first I want to say a few things. They may sound harsh, but I only say this because I care.
1. You say that Meowth saw a Kirikizan in the first paragraph, but later it becomes a Komotana.
2. "It was now a he." Was it a female before this? You say this a bit later in the story, but I think you should cross out the "now" part so that it says; "It was a he/male/she/female.", whichever you prefer.
3. A knot is the base of a dogs penis (the bump that the testicles make when they rise from the ballsack), not the penis itself.
4. Shadow Claw is a Ghost-Type move. Ghost-Type moves do not work on Normal-Types like Haderia.
Sorry for being so critical, but I see a lot of potential in this story and I want to help by sorting out the small mistakes that authors usually make (believe me, I'm not much better myself XD ). I will give you this though, you don't have any grammatical errors (at least not any glaring ones, because I would've seen those), which is very good.
Good luck with your stories! :)
| lostaunau11 chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Please continue, I wanna know what's gonna happen :3