Reviews for Noctambulism
Guest chapter 2 . 9/18
This is good, but i would say you do need to add more detail. The story is a good example where the writing tells instead of shows, and it ends up reading a little bit like a summary of a story rather than the story itself. Instead of summary details like "Gambit acclimated to the mansion and started teaching classes" try including scenes that show Gambit teaching or interacting with others.

You've got a really great foundation here, it just needs to be more fleshed out to make a truly great story!
Sakuraangel1327 chapter 13 . 5/30/2014
Just one thing: when Quicksilver takes Magneto away, I'm confused because I thought ShadowCat phased his arms and legs into the floor? Otherwise: OMG LOVE IT AND AM ABOUT TO READ THE SEQUEL!
TheValkyrie9 chapter 8 . 6/18/2013
"and for some reason, 'I'm glad I didn't wear my magenta shirt, we would have clashed horribly'."
God help me, I really did marry Gambit...that's exactly how my husband's mind works.
TheValkyrie9 chapter 5 . 6/17/2013
This makes me wish I knew anything about cars...BRILLIANT.
Anne Marie Masen chapter 13 . 3/21/2013
me gusta rogue emparejada con john
Minya-Mari chapter 2 . 1/17/2013
I absolutely love this fic. You have no idea.
DaenerysArcher chapter 13 . 12/29/2012
This is an amazing story and I love the dark ending. You're right, not everything ends happily and if you ask me the fact that it's a bitter-sweet ending with R
Ange fonce chapter 13 . 11/16/2012
The ending was a little flat but you had a great story :)
IrisAyame chapter 13 . 10/12/2012
I enjoyed reading your story, even if the end is quite dark, as you said. It's refreshing reading something different.

Thanks for writing and sharing this story.
ch3nya chapter 13 . 7/20/2012
Loved your story and me personally liked the ending its refreshing to read something other than and they lived happily ever after.
Mew of Fire chapter 13 . 1/21/2012
great story!
Yoruichi89 chapter 2 . 12/28/2011
loveing it so far my fav part of this ch is the last few lines LOL great job cant wate to read the rest of it
angel19872006 chapter 13 . 12/14/2011
I have a few quick questions how did Quicksilver remove Magneto from the ground after kitty phased his (Magneto) hands and feet into the ground...And I thought the comic series said that Kitty is like Nightcrawler you know if they half way phased or teleported it could be dangerous...IE if Nightcrawler doesn't see where he's going he could get stuck in a wall and end up killing himself...And Kitty would end up losing a limb (legs, head, arms or torso)if she stopped in the middle of a phase...I would think that if they used there powers on someone else it would do the same aka Magneto would lose both hands and feet epically since the ground is solid and she lets go. It would mean that her powers would be longer in effect
Warrior-princess1980 chapter 2 . 9/28/2011
The very last part of chapter 2, hands down best lines ever. That still cracks me up!
Mad Hatter Helsing chapter 13 . 7/30/2011
amazing story.
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