Okay first off I love this story. This chapter is a total cliffhanger and I hate you for it!

(Crazy theory, but is Puck in a coma?)

Meanie! Writing cliff-hangers damages your readers' health! However, I damn well hope that this accident will push this lovely story (which is amazing as a friendship fic on its own) into the 'romance' category. :) Definitely waiting for more!

This story is amazing. I love the way you write Kurt and Puck, they seems so realistic. And Kurt's falling in love with him has basis! (That doesn't happen often haha) I like how he's not overly girly in this. He wears cologne, he plays video games, but he's still essentially the same. Very realistic in that sense. :)

I can't wait to find out what happens... I hope they're okay!

Great story~ :)

OH. MY. GOD.

Ok this possibly the best Puck/Kurt story I've ever read, and you just let me hanging reaaaally bad here. Whoa, the way you put them is just how I see them being together. I feel mind raped xD.

No, but seriously, I really love the way you've developed their characters and I really appreciate the Rachel-hate for a change xD No, I don't hate her, but she 7does/ get too much solos. So Yes! your story is magnificent and /please/ do continue it soon. I'll be patiently waiting. Ok, not patiently, not at all, but waiting? YES.

Oh, and just a quick remark. I'm not Jewish, but I'm a cook so I tend to be obnoxious on these things, please do not take this seriously or anything, just thought you should know. Kösher food can't actually be done if you're not Jewish without at least the company of the head of the family. See, you can't light fires yourself, the head of the family has to do it and every product needs to go by a sanitary exam made by him/her. So it's actually not Kösher.

Please ignore my major ranting? LOL

Your story is fabulous, keep on going, this was so fucking awesome, I can't even.

Ok, then. Love! Carly.

Oy vay! Cliffhanger much? Heartless, brutal, mean, against the Geneva Convention, cruel and unusual punishment. Great story but PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I MEAN RIGHT NOW.

Actual critiquing:

I really like the way you have slowly developed the rapport between Kurt and Puck. I find it very believable; also the personality construct you have developed for Puck, particularly as a result of his experiences in juvie. There are a few problems with the English, but not so many that it stops me from enjoying the story. I'm guessing English isn't your first language.

you are soooo bad! its so fun and sweet the interaction between puck and kurt, i feel like i'm watching a movie :) and then you go and make them have an accident. i really really really hope that they just had a big scare and nothing serious happened... you are a faboulous writer i'm sure you won't disappoint us!

Kurt's audition scene gave me this weird sense of satisfaction. I could completely imagine all their faces and I'm feeling so satisfied on Kurt's behalf.

CLIFFHANGER...

Oh. You're really evil, you know ? I had this big smile on my face, and then...yeah, unexpected ending. I guess the "drama" part of the story just started ?

Anyway, great story so far ; I'll be there for the next chapter !

OH NO! what happppppens next? Please update soon!

MY GOD! I've never read a puckxkurt story brilliantly made like this before.

You've done a fabulous job. I love how the progress of their relationship. its believable and it feels sincere. cant wait for next chapter. super great great great job. It made me want to do an illustration of the, Riding kurt's car and thier photo booth pictures!

Love it

ellery

DX!

Así que de esto hablabas cuando me dijsite que "iban a pasar ciertas cosas"! D Estoy preocupada ahora U_U Espero que el accidente no sea tan malo como me imagino...

Aparte de eso... me encanta cuando Kurt llama a Puck "el amor de su vida" XD Es tan dramático.

¡Y amé el nuevo duelo! Yay por Kurt!

Keep up with the story. I cant wait to find out what happens next. Love the story. Great job.

sooo at first I was excited to the 10th degree to see that you had updated...and so soon too...but then I got to the end of this chapter...ummm how the heck am I suppose to deal with this cliffhanger? I wish desperately that there was the 'next' button I could click so I could read what happens after the accident. I think I need another update like ASAP!

Anyways...I really liked how you showed that their interactions in Glee are changing as a result of their friendship (i.e. Kurt's boost in self confidence and Puck's displays of encouragement). In addition, I can totally picture Puck singing kiddie pop songs horribly off key!

Thanks so much for the update!

OMG!What a cliff hanger! But angst is good! Please update soon!

AHHHHHHH!

I WAS ABOUT GO TO SLEEP!

now imma gonna worry about poor purt getting squished:(((

burrriotoes! burry-toes:/ ew

it breaks my heart in movies and books and stuff when its such a sweet scene then something terrible happens:'(

burriotoes! rio-toes go in flip flops!

burrrrr-toes

cold-toes

keep bein awesome!:)

Sacha:)