Reviews for The Sting |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Is it weird that I was agreeing with what Kurt was saying in every argument? The texting, the perfume, all that jazz? You should have some sort of talk show. Anyways, I lovelovelovelovelove this fanfic so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Awww Kurt's offering to share his hunnies with Puck. How romantic. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this update and how their friendship is slowly growing. It's amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Please keep writing this! *begs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hola! Me encantó el capítulo! :3 Disfruto mucho de las conversaciones que creas para estos dos, como lo del asunto bully al principio, así como lo de los perfumes. La lógica de Puck, después de la excelente explicación de Kurt, me hizo reír mucho XD Y estoy feliz de ver la atracción está comenzando de la parte de Kurt ;D Nos leemos~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I loved it...I laughed at the explanation Kurt was having to give Puck...The romance is starting...I just think it is going to be a rough road for both of them...Cant wait for the next update...Peace |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww i love it ! please continue! 33 |
![]() ![]() ![]() despite the obvious grammer mistakes, i think the narrative - how you tell the story- flows quite well. would love to read the next chap/s~ - |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story so far. I am entertained by Puck and his studly ways lol. Can't wait for the next update. huggles nikkler |
![]() ![]() ![]() It saddens me that you haven't found a beta for this story! Really, the only things that irked me were the grammar goofs, but considering Spanish is your first language, that's totally understandable. I happily offer you my services, even though I don't have an official beta reader profile for FF. I'd /love/ to go through this first chapter's dialogue with you, as a matter of fact. I can't wait to see where you're taking this story! I'm especially looking forward to Kurt's inevitable confrontation with Finn- and, even better, Puck's reaction to the escalating bullying! I think my favorite part of the first chapter was when Puck noticed Kurt scanning the parking lot and called him out on it! Just read the plot synopsis on Futurama's "The Sting" episode and I like what I see. I like VERY MUCH. ._. You say "slightly" and I wonder, 'How slightly?' Deadly hate mob? Fire? KNIVES? Frankly, I'm ecstatic at the thought of you pushing their developing relationship to the limit. Truly, the thought of them hurting each other, even inadvertently, kills me a little inside, but the "making up" part is well worth the heart ache! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it. Puck is really funny. (seriously though, umbrellas are for wimps. then again, I come from a place where it rains sideways regularly...) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I love to see them building up a friendship and I really really liked this first chapter and now I'm looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was wicked and I can totally overlook the errors, though it IS better finding out English isn't your first language. I hope you post the next chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hola! Vi que en tus notas de autora dices que tu primera lengua es el español y fui a tu perfil y vi que sos de Argentina! Yay! Me too! XD Estoy tan feliz de que haya otras fans del Purt como yo D: Porque tengo amigos que miran Glee... pero cuando les digo que me gusta a Kurt con Puck... me miran raro DX Pero bueno... es casi cliché... no sé cómo nos le puede gustar u_u En fin, vamos al fic. Lo que leí hasta ahora me encantó! :3 Me encanta ver a este Puck así y que todas las ideas preconcevidas que tiene Kurt de él (al menos las más malas) Puck le esté demostrando que no son verdad. No puedo esperar para ver cuando empiece el romance :D Genial historia, espero leer más pronto! ;D |