|Reviews for Displaced|
| Scissors Dolphin chapter 4 . 8/1/2020
Eyeroll at including rape in a DBZ story. And android 17? Really, Lmao. You are really digging into the bottom of the barrel here.
If nothing else has clued you in that this is a bad story, this certainly would.
| Scissors Dolphin chapter 2 . 8/1/2020
I swear, both of these 2 Gohans are idiots. What? Can't they use some basic logic and communication skills?
| SSJViper chapter 12 . 2/2/2020
Nooooooo! How could u fucking abandon it here!?
Jkjk, I love the story, it's super insteresting and I've never read anything like it before.
| cc6512 chapter 12 . 3/19/2019
I wrote a long review but accidentally lost it...
Anyway, if I only can suggest one Gohan Videl story to others, this is the one. Your plus one is good also, but Displaced is amazing. The idea is so unique.
Although I really want to know what will happen next, but maybe unfinished also a attractive point of this story.
(I hope they won't fusion as one gohan, and future videl should talk to gohan and videl is a little bit poor(two gohan also want f videl) but compared to other three, she don't really face hard issues that much...but if she will build a relationship with gohan, they should speed some time and fix the gohan-future videl problem... )
This story make me want to draw a comic about this story (or future and present Videl exchange bodies) :)
Finally this story really great ~~~
| KickAssV chapter 12 . 1/10/2018
Oh my gosh! How could you leave it there? What is Gohan going to do? I can’t help but feel super bad for Videl though if they just leave her aside. She should fuse with the older Videl as well to be with Gohan.
This story was super unique and original, even six years later. On the very off chance you see this review, please consider finishing this story or at least tell me what was supposed to happen and how it ends? I have never been so hooked on a fanfic before and I think you should take it as a testament to your awesome story telling skills. :) Well, here’s hoping that you see this and do something about it.
| QueenKeesie chapter 12 . 11/11/2016
I love this story and have read it over and over the last few years. If you even ever see this review, could you reply and tell me how it was supposed to end?
Your work is amazing.
| KageOkami-Kogo chapter 12 . 11/24/2015
You can NOT simply leave this here! Such an amazing story, I loved how complex it is and the range of emotions is spectacular! At first I wasn't sure about how you write "Mirai" Gohan, but I ended up really liking how you wrote him. Very excellent job and I hope you'll update it as soon as you're able to!
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/1/2015
Tu si vas a actualizar? Porque lei esta historia en otro idioma que no es el mio originalmente.
Es realmente complicado hacerlo pero lo importante es que me encanto esta historia y me fasinaria si la continuaras...
| Videlfan chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Read this story ages ago and I hope you will update soon.
Everyone's saying they feel sorry for Present Gohan because he can't have Mirai Videl...but I feel well and truly sorry for my girl Present Videl. You're making her out to be unwanted; both Gohans want Mirai Videl and now you have Present Gohan saying he now thinks of them as two completely different people who have nothing to do with one another.(HOW can that be? Present Videl is his crush/teenage fantasy and the only reason he was attracted to Mirai Videl in the first place) That means he loves/wants Mirai Videl and NOT Present Videl. HOW IS THAT FAIR? Don't get me wrong. I LIKE Mirai Videl but if I had to choose one over the other than I'm sticking with my girl: Present/Teen Videl all the way! How can you not love her? Ever since he's reunited with Mirai Vdel even Mirai Gohan seems to have become distant/cold towards poor Teen Videl. Why should she miss out? NO WAY should Mirai Videl get both while Videl is left in the cold.
Also, on a side note, I also did not like that throw-away line about Gohan having lost his virginity with some other random girl. It was needless AND contradictory when, only a few chapters earlier, you had him saying he had never been this up close and personal with a girl when Mirai Videl got him to carry her. I like to disregard that little pointless detail entirely when I read this story. Also, in the hospital, you had Mirai Gohan think ''Well, hello'' whilst eyeing a random nurse in a short outfit. Was he checking her out? WHY? That seems random AND bizarre.
| Ranglar chapter 12 . 9/3/2014
This is an amazing story, and you're evil for leaving it on this cliffhanger for so long!
| lmvb chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
I fell in love with this story...please update soon
| brograham18 chapter 12 . 4/30/2014
One of my favorite stories, it would be great if you finished it :)
| MRMenaMRM chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
I had come across this story again and had to re read it! Seriously it's been over a year since you posted chpt 12! Everyone is dying to read more! I for one still hope for the separation after the fusion! No way in hell should Mirai Videl get to keep all the glory known as "warrior Gohan" and poor Videl left out in the cold! Such a BEAUTIFUL story! Cant wait for chpt 13 to be realeased one day;) Xoxo, MRMenaMRM.
| XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 12 . 2/28/2014
bro update PLZ!
| XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 7 . 2/28/2014