Reviews for Displaced
Guest chapter 12 . 8/1
Tu si vas a actualizar? Porque lei esta historia en otro idioma que no es el mio originalmente.
Es realmente complicado hacerlo pero lo importante es que me encanto esta historia y me fasinaria si la continuaras...
Videlfan chapter 1 . 7/7
Read this story ages ago and I hope you will update soon.
Everyone's saying they feel sorry for Present Gohan because he can't have Mirai Videl...but I feel well and truly sorry for my girl Present Videl. You're making her out to be unwanted; both Gohans want Mirai Videl and now you have Present Gohan saying he now thinks of them as two completely different people who have nothing to do with one another.(HOW can that be? Present Videl is his crush/teenage fantasy and the only reason he was attracted to Mirai Videl in the first place) That means he loves/wants Mirai Videl and NOT Present Videl. HOW IS THAT FAIR? Don't get me wrong. I LIKE Mirai Videl but if I had to choose one over the other than I'm sticking with my girl: Present/Teen Videl all the way! How can you not love her? Ever since he's reunited with Mirai Vdel even Mirai Gohan seems to have become distant/cold towards poor Teen Videl. Why should she miss out? NO WAY should Mirai Videl get both while Videl is left in the cold.
Also, on a side note, I also did not like that throw-away line about Gohan having lost his virginity with some other random girl. It was needless AND contradictory when, only a few chapters earlier, you had him saying he had never been this up close and personal with a girl when Mirai Videl got him to carry her. I like to disregard that little pointless detail entirely when I read this story. Also, in the hospital, you had Mirai Gohan think ''Well, hello'' whilst eyeing a random nurse in a short outfit. Was he checking her out? WHY? That seems random AND bizarre.
Ranglar chapter 12 . 9/3/2014
This is an amazing story, and you're evil for leaving it on this cliffhanger for so long!
yobibi18 chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
I fell in love with this story...please update soon
brograham18 chapter 12 . 4/30/2014
One of my favorite stories, it would be great if you finished it :)
MRMenaMRM chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
I had come across this story again and had to re read it! Seriously it's been over a year since you posted chpt 12! Everyone is dying to read more! I for one still hope for the separation after the fusion! No way in hell should Mirai Videl get to keep all the glory known as "warrior Gohan" and poor Videl left out in the cold! Such a BEAUTIFUL story! Cant wait for chpt 13 to be realeased one day;) Xoxo, MRMenaMRM.
XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 12 . 2/28/2014
bro update PLZ!
XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 7 . 2/28/2014
great!
XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 4 . 2/28/2014
hilariously sadly great
XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
wtf? lol
Mararsi chapter 12 . 2/21/2014
Awww, now I'm really sad you never finished this, ya jerk! I definitely wasn't sure at the beginning but I love it now by the end. Great job not getting sidetracked by telling two separate stories, nice job characterizing and not going too far into angst, thank you soo much for not letting him be an idiot and letting the androids live just to prolong the story or for some stupid arse reason like so many fanfiction authors do. And.. I forget the rest, so thanks for all the hard work, I hope you come back to this and finish it sometime!
euroteres chapter 12 . 2/17/2014
Gahhhhh, of all places you had to go and leave this story for two years it had to be here of all places? I hope you pick this up again eventually.
DarkVoid116 chapter 12 . 12/12/2013
AWESOME STORY, GUE.

I've now plowed through When a Demon Calls and Displaced in the last few weeks, and I don't know which I like better. The grammar was way better in this story, but both plots are convoluted and insane.

I think I may prefer this one solely for the inclusion of Mirai Videl and Mirai Gohan, Goku's fusion, and the fact that I believe this Gohan is more true to his original canon character than your WaDC version, who is self-absorbed and constantly makes mistakes in judgment.

This Gohan is true to himself in a lot of ways, maintains that naivety, nerdiness, and nervousness that I expect to see from Gohan but still is a no-nonsense guy in battle and was able to rise to the occasion and not let his so-called Saiyan side blind him by arrogance.

Mirai Gohan and Mirai Videl have such an incredible dynamic as a couple, and it enhances this story. I kinda hope both Gohan's fuse and both Videl's fuse, but that would require many sacrifices and even more concessions from Mirai Videl- a talk between ex-lovers would need to be in there, too.

I love that Videl kissed Gohan at the end of this chapter, and I can't wait for more out of their situation.

A truly amazing piece of writing, Gue! Great story!
DarkVoid116 chapter 11 . 12/12/2013
When the god damn fuck is Mirai Videl going to talk to Gohan? Seriously? I really liked Mirai Videl for a very long time in this story, but she's annoying me. Did all the memories of how hesitant Gohan was to do anything with her disappear? Has she forgotten how compassionate he was, how he thrived to become stronger and destroy the Androids and free her world? How he was thrust into a new situation and was probably scared & confused? The signs were all there. Not to mention, he had a crush on Videl to begin with in his time & just did what Mirai Gohan himself did. I don't see her big issue. She's being fucking petty.

Great chapter, though, nonetheless. The Seraph-driven nightmares suck, but Mirai Gohan and Gohan getting along is nice.

Hopefully Videl gives Mirai Gohan the time of day to fix things right now. Great chapter.
DarkVoid116 chapter 10 . 12/12/2013
I really wish Mirai Videl would give Gohan a chance to offer an explanation. It's not every day that this convoluted situation arises. Given the stakes, why not give the guy an opportunity to explain himself?

I also think the entire situation is craaaazy. At least it's beginning to take shape. If I've got this correctly, there's a villain, one we don't know, coming to terrorize and all that jazz. Seraph, this Supreme Kai dude, wants Gohan of both times to fuse with Potara earrings, which the two Goku's have already done. In order to facilitate this perfect harmony hubbub, Gohans were switched and everything in this story went down as they lived one another's lives?

So two Videls and two Gohans make four interested parties. This should be great.
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