|Reviews for The Cloaked Woman|
| Green Sirene chapter 8 . 1/8/2012
Is Et going to want something in return for her assistance?
| Sxcsami chapter 16 . 11/16/2011
Oh My Fucking God! Jesus Christ! I didn't even know if you were still on this site! If you even finished this story... Maybe I never found it because you changed your user-name and for some reasons I didn't get the email alert...? But today I was just sitting on the bus when I remembered this little story and I just had to find it again! This story is so beautiful and inspiring! I absolutely loved every minute of it! Thank you so much for writing this :) Oh, and please don't lose the will to write! I can't believe you murdered Fred & George in the very end though... Even though it was so very sweet for them to die side by side :) The little cuties! But wow, I've missed you and your unique writing style! Please never quit :(
This is an amazing story,, you're an amazing author and I look forward to reading more of your pieces :) Love you foreverrrr!
Reviews are love
| stellzroxs chapter 16 . 11/7/2011
| Dimcairien chapter 16 . 11/6/2011
I have enjoyed thus story and am sorry to see it end. Loved the tidbits about their life afterwards. I wonder how much damage was done to Hogwarts during the four kids' years.
| Dimcairien chapter 14 . 11/6/2011
Yay, Fred's back with his family. I also like it that you've paired Fred and Angelina together. Please continue soon.
| Dimcairien chapter 15 . 8/5/2011
I'm looking forward to the sequel. I can tell that you've improved since the first story in this series. I know what it's like to look over a previous story and shudder. Please update as soon as you can.
| Dimcairien chapter 13 . 2/24/2011
Holy cow. I was really confused with the way Fred was acting. I hope they can get him back to normal, or as normal as is possible, soon. Can't wait to see what you do next.
| Dimcairien chapter 12 . 2/21/2011
Yay! Fred's comming back! Or he better be. Can't wait to see the families reactions, especially Percy's since Fred was the first or his siblings to forgive him.
| Sxcsami chapter 11 . 2/10/2011
I don't necisarrily believe in "aliens" as in the green martians with antennas and stuff but i do believe in lifefroms on different planets :) millions of new species are found everyday so just because we haven't "found" them yet doesn't mean they're not there :)
loved this chapter! hmm luna as et? maybe... but i don't think so :)
im so glad i had this story to read! i'm in maths and so bored!
hmmm... i wonder why they need to go to jupiter...
this was very well written! and u like never have any typos!
feed me spoilers! :)
| Sxcsami chapter 10 . 2/5/2011
Uhh... Wtf is a Mc'chicken? Lol, we must not have them here in Australia... :P But then again I am veggo so how would i know lol :P
There were about a hundred thousand kangaroos standing there, all bouncing around happily. He smiled. They looked so nice. Awwwwww :3 i love Kangaroo's! Except for the one that kicked me!
Loving this story! But if George fell 100 ft would he be dead? lol? :P
Your writing is so amazingly perfect! Can't wait to you updated!
| Dimcairien chapter 10 . 2/5/2011
A dedication to McDonalds? I don't think I've ever seen that. Good chapter, it's getting more and more interesting as it goes along.
| LingeringLuminosity chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
The story premise hooked me as it seems very intriguing and original but the prose in the first chapter was very basic.
It was easy to read and follow, but it seemed as though there was a lot in the way of description- scene setting, emotions and what not that felt missing. It was far too short to really hook me the way that the summary did and you really need to break up your dialogue with things happening and convey more of what George is thinking.
What you have got is decent and decently written- your spelling and grammar seem fine, but there absolutely needs to be more of it. Please develop your description. Aside from that, nice job.
| Dimcairien chapter 9 . 1/31/2011
Whew, for a second there I thought that Voldemort was going to come back. He better not.
I've always thought that the hand would either fall off or be point it 'at rest' or 'eternal home' when someone was dead. Just my two cents.
| Dimcairien chapter 8 . 1/28/2011
What the hell? Does Voldy Moldy have another Horcrux that no one knew about?
| Sxcsami chapter 8 . 1/28/2011
AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE! The best country in the world :)
Wow cliffhanger ending!
Well i seriously have to go now so this reviews like short but w/e