|Reviews for healing wounds|
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/13/2016
If you read this please more! Your story is great
| pain in the mikta chapter 12 . 9/21/2015
It's a fine story : too bad you haven't updated since this chapter... :-(
| vonny25 chapter 2 . 2/18/2015
I hope you still consider finishing the stroy
| vonny25 chapter 7 . 2/18/2015
| vonny25 chapter 12 . 1/18/2015
nice story. I guess you are not finishing it.
| Heroicfantasyfan chapter 12 . 2/18/2013
Yes I have an idea.
As I'm a big sadistic, I think that Aramis could finally be captured by the King's men, and it would be to the others to free him!
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
good i like how u create suspense the end
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
The one thing that really turned me off of reading this story is the fact that, you don't capitalise the words that need to be capitalised. Not only do names and places need to be capitalised but so do the beginning of paragraphs and sentences.
"you called your majesty"
No, there are so many things wrong with this first chapter, so I will fix it up to my standards.
"You called, your Majesty?"
"Yes, d'Artagnan, I want to know why the three traitors, you call friends are still on the loose..."
"No, Your Majesty, it is my duty to protect you. I swore it when I became a musketeer."
"If that is the case, tell me where they are meeting and where they are hiding."
My Lord is something that the English use. The French don't normally call their kings that preferring Sire or even Monsieur Le Roi. My Lord is just something that was more common at the English courts than French.
You need to work on a lot of things before this story fascinated me long enough to actually go to the next chapters. Seeing this amount of mistakes turns off a lot of people and unfortunately, I refuse to go read the rest.
| EmmatheEvil chapter 12 . 8/7/2012
I love your story... It should have really ended this way...Can't wait to read more...I've loved especially the last chapter...with father and son bonding...great work
| Emm chapter 12 . 7/12/2012
Cant wait to read more
| Aranel Mirfain chapter 12 . 6/16/2012
Hope all is ok, I believe patience is a virtue. All good things are worth waiting for and good Man in the Iron Mask fics are so rare! Good luck with your rewrite, I'll certainly be keeping an eye out for it D
| MunksAngelQueen2010 chapter 12 . 6/8/2012
My idea is that louis finds out about his true father and that his brother is alive and decides to kill phillipe or something and that could lead up 2 the switch
| lilgenious chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
You need to work on your capitalisation. It is really annoying to see this written in a story:
"you called your Majesty?" and it isn't just one little mistake it is over and over and over again.
Even within the dialogue with the quotations around it, you should always capitalise the first letter.
"You called, your Majesty?" You also need to work on your grammar.
Besides all that, I look forward to reading the next few chapters.
| Minerva of The Arctic Mountain chapter 11 . 4/6/2012
hi i just found your story today and i know its been over a year since you have updated but could you please update soon. i would love to read more.
i love your story! UPDATE SOON!
| Minstrel of Gondor chapter 11 . 11/15/2011
this story is wonderful. update plzzzzzzzzzzzzz.