|Reviews for Organized Chaos|
| thesilvermoonlight chapter 78 . 2/7
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. Rikkaidai is my favorite and you are fabulous for writing this. Please update soon!
| EmeraldLily7918 chapter 11 . 2/5
A nice egotistical ass? Those are rare, like unicorns and lepricons that actually share their gold. Make no mistake, I've seen both, but still, pretty rare. And I love this fan fiction. It's really interesting how you characterize Sanada. Is he gonna have a soap of his own to go through?
| apple tea and sunshine chapter 15 . 7/16/2013
Wow 0-0 so it actually is possible to chip a tooth on a fence!
| apple tea and sunshine chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
OH MY GOD, THAT IS JUST NOT FAIR, THE MAIN OC IS TALLER THAN I AM AND THAT'S STILL CALLED SHORT -_-
| urhgnw chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
I LOVE THIS STORY! The writing, the structured plot, the characters... I'm impressed by everything about it :) But what I admire the most is your dedication to it. 78 chapters! 2 years! Wow, I really hope I can become as great a writer as you someday :)
| milkANDinkstains chapter 78 . 4/24/2013
AAAAHHHH A RIKKAI-CENTERED FIC WHERE HAS THIS BEEN MY ENTIRE LIIIIFEEEE
There is Urayama too, goodness!
(And I love how you portrayed Niou as someone rich. It's kinda of ironic- the trickster/swindler actually being the one with a lot of money. HA!)
| Arysthae chapter 78 . 4/22/2013
This story is pretty awesome. I love the 'Niou is rich' storyline along with Sato Ree and I like Sanada and Renji's storylines. They're very real. It's nice to see them acting as real teenage boys, but I felt that they lost a bit of the maturity that they possessed in canon, especially when it comes to the way they deal with situations.
I also really like Oyama and Urayama; they're really well-portrayed here. Obviously, Urayama is canon, but I'm going to treat him like an OC, because it's unlikely that Konomi-sensei will ever expand upon his character. They were mature, and self-possessed and not perfect either. That was nice.
I wasn't a fan of Suzuki's character, but she is a 3-D OC, so I haven't really got complaints about her portrayal. I was indifferent to Koga and really like Kirihara's friends, as they're lively and boisterous and generally hilarious.
In short, this story was very interesting and I hope that you write more of it!
| iLupinus chapter 78 . 3/29/2013
Ohh... I remember reading this chapter, and I was literally giddy with excitement after reading it because well, Music school.
Niou's brother is attending.
It's just like in dISsonance! \o/
And that cello player... bishie. I can tell.
Ohohoho, I told myself I would review every chapter of this story, and I ain't quitting now. I've been so silent lately on FFN lately, but I've been crazy active on deviantart. I really need to find a balance between the two.
I'll be forever patient because I LOVE this story. I so just reread it before reviewing the latest chapters. :D
| iLupinus chapter 77 . 3/29/2013
Have I ever mentioned that I love Akaya?
'Cause I do. And I think it's because of you. XD
Hakuna matata indeed...
I hate Akaya's sister by the way. I don't see her being characterized any other way then the way she is in this fic as I believe that it is totally canon, but... still hate her. Reminds me of my sister revved up to the max.
But, yeah, Akaya. I love Akaya's childishness, or whatever you call the way you write him.
| iLupinus chapter 76 . 3/29/2013
Ahh... when I first read this, I loved it so much, but I had no idea how to properly word it.
Quite frankly, I still don't. But I'll just let you know that I loved this.
I loved this.
| Riichanx3 chapter 12 . 3/4/2013
Seriously, I'm in love with ur story. It's perfect. Really. Plz update if u have time! I love niou and sato ree the most, but akaya and his friends are adorably weird:D
| SunnyDorangejuice chapter 78 . 3/3/2013
I liked that whole part about the Kirihara angst, even though I have *absolutely* /no/ idea what came out of it...
Oh, and I loved the whole water-gun fight thingy after every tournament they win (that /is/ from this story, right? Ah, geez...I can't remember...). That part is always hilarious.
Maybe you should do a little check on some of the grammar? Just a little suggestion. (The A/N for this chappie, in the incentive to read section after "Bite Me", it says "Actually has a plot know!")
Love the story! Update soon!
| mintish chapter 78 . 2/24/2013
hi Dolphin :) I just read chapters 73-78 and I am way too tired to write you a proper review (sorry!) but I just wanted to review anyway to let you know that I'm alive and enjoying your fic :D hope college is treating you well!
| Chibi-Onee-chan chapter 78 . 2/23/2013
Woohoo an update! I wonder the significance of the kid at end of the chapter. And I wanna know Jackal's move. Can wait for more :3
| LainellaFay chapter 78 . 2/22/2013
Jackal has a new move! OMG! What is it? ;o; So glad that Marui and Jackal managed to complete their formation.
Aha, Akaya, learn how to ref properly xD
Who's that electric blue streaks in black hair guy? Bet he'll be a strong opponent in the Nationals, won't he? Well, I'm just guessing here xD
And Niou walking into women's restrooms in The Pokemon Chronicles? Can't wait for that!