|Reviews for Unpredictable|
| The Cheshire Cheese chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
This was fantastic.
(Okay, one typo; near the end John asks "Think you'll gave time to help a friend..." I think you meant "give." That's the only constructive criticism I can give you here.)
Anyway, this was SO in the style of "Dark City." And Dr. Schreiber's dialogue was spot on. The image of him talking to his rat by the window was SO cute.