|Reviews for Unpredictable|
| DigitalHelix chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
Nice! Gives some hope of friendly forward-looking recovery to the poor, mangled savior of the City. It'd be nice to see more of this...people working together to make the world work...but you'd have to figure out what the problems are and then how to solve them! In any event, this was satisfying. Thank you!
| KrinWashu chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
This was wonderful. The moment he started talking to the rat... wow. I really love the ending with John arriving. It works great as an epilogue and I really enjoyed hearing the dialogue in my head with his voice (well-done pauses). I'm glad I went looking for Dark City fic! Too bad there are so few. Anyway, thanks for sharing!
| The Cheshire Cheese chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
This was fantastic.
(Okay, one typo; near the end John asks "Think you'll gave time to help a friend..." I think you meant "give." That's the only constructive criticism I can give you here.)
Anyway, this was SO in the style of "Dark City." And Dr. Schreiber's dialogue was spot on. The image of him talking to his rat by the window was SO cute.