|Reviews for Out of the Unknown|
| Leroy-San chapter 26 . 1/27
Great story so far.
| Leroy-San chapter 20 . 1/26
I'm really enjoying your story. It's very well written and the plot is getting thicker and thicker. I look forward to reading more.
| Cabrio9f chapter 13 . 1/26
Love the story. But still think jaaba being killed will ruin the events involved with him in the star wars timeline. Not just movies I mean.
| Leroy-San chapter 16 . 1/25
Good chapter. I'm curious if there will end being any pairings in this story.
| Leroy-San chapter 11 . 1/25
Good story so far.
| Leroy-San chapter 3 . 1/25
Enjoying the story so far
| Leroy-San chapter 1 . 1/25
Good story so far
| Guest chapter 35 . 1/22
Amazing story you got going here; this was a great chapter too.
| Guest chapter 35 . 1/20
And as I reread this chapter I discover I am a Shilaea/Doro shipper.
Yes, I should kill myself now.
Thank you for writing this.
Yet again it brought a smile to my face.
| Cabrio9f chapter 24 . 1/17
I think its a mistake to kill Jaba the hurt. They could've done business with him. Gato making deals with jaaba. If they got their way tricking jaaba that the fake body is naruto. Everything should follow canon Star Wars with the added stuff from the past plus naruto characters. Play parts in every movie made so far
| itwasadarkandstormynight chapter 22 . 1/8
I hate how careless you make Naruto around Kabuto bad how much free rein he gets overall besides that I love everything about your story keep up the good work
| mfmxxx chapter 16 . 12/30/2016
Tenten seems far to demanding for being a genin.
| Ibskib chapter 2 . 12/29/2016
It feels pretty jarring to have someone so young reason so logically, the story would make more sense if Naruto was at least a few years older.
Right now there's not enough SoD in the world to buy this.
Aside from this the writing is a bit clumsy in places, especially when it shifts to Plagueis
| Lumster chapter 35 . 12/22/2016
Just got to the end of this fic and I have to give it credit at being so long, while it has been almost a year without an update even incomplete this is a lengthy read. That said another review brought into focus what I had been thinking as I read this story. Simply put this is the Seinfeld of fan fiction. It's a story about nothing. Tons of things happen but not in any real way that would normally be seen as a plot of an action, romance, drama etc. Big huge plot hooks are thrown into being than abandoned or forgotten about. Thousands of words, years can pass by in story and what used to be major plot elements cease to matter. At first this was okay because most of those revolved around Naruto's home world that he left. But then things like finding lost artifacts leading to treasure or replicating technology or items he found just get shelved. It was even brought up in the story time and again how Naruto has too much to do, yet keeps finding more ways to get tied into things like with the Black Sun. Ignoring all that we have characters that seemed important, characters the story spent thousands of words and several chapters building up that just disappear into oblivion. So while I liked the underlying idea of this story and appreciate the skill of the author at writing various scenes etc I have the over all feeling of this being the Sitcom approach to a story. Random stuff happens on an episode by episode basis with little to no cause and effect or actions taking place.
| Vilkath chapter 32 . 12/22/2016
Big epic chapter but I have to say the fight with the clone got a bit more tedious as it dragged on. It was written more like your standard Naruto-verse ninja battle with constant feints, deceptions and sudden tricks out of no where to constantly turn what seems like a finishing blow into nothing. Something that has not really been done at all in this fic, and Naruto himself has never fought on such a multi level of tactical thought. He either won quickly or suffered horrible injuries rather quickly. As the fight dragged on and on I couldn't help feeling glad that they finally started talking, even if the argument was a bit odd. Yes Naruto was a vastly different person from he was a kid. He fought to protect complete strangers before while now he basically seemingly doesn't care about any one he comes across. That said ninja were not really any better than the Sith pawn the clone painted Naruto as. They had to do what they were told by the village no matter what and in many cases the village came first no matter what.