Reviews for Her Beauty
thecalicocat chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Needs work on grammar. Periods are missing after every sentence where someone is talking. Example: "Aye my child, I wish for you to meet Legolas, son of Thranduil, Prince Of Mirkwood" Elrond said pointing to Legolas who stood roated to the spot wondering what LĂșthien would do. Also, I think you mean rooted, not roated. Run through spell check and grammar check before posting next time. There's more to writing a good story than imagination. Good writing starts with the basics ~ grammar & structure.
Teamravenclaw chapter 4 . 3/12/2011
Very nice fanfic! :) :)
Kamai6 chapter 2 . 2/25/2011
Fantastic!

:)

Kamai6
witchqueen02 chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Please continue!I love this story so far :)
dutchessdaydreamer chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
That was great. When are you posting more up?
Kamai6 chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Nice!

:)

Kamai6