Reviews for Undeserving
Guest chapter 7 . 2/7
I loved this one
minervatyrrell chapter 7 . 12/8/2014
Liked great story
mashiro.x.shiina chapter 7 . 4/16/2014
This really seems like something Sakura would go through. She always has had issues thinking she isn't ever good enough, and I think she would definitely go through a stage of that in a situation like this. Good job!
dzad chapter 7 . 1/16/2014
Good story. A bit repetitive and I can see a few stolen scenes in here (s'okay). but what's important is that you did a good job of writing the story of two people in love who find that being lovers can often be like fitting a square peg into a round hole. The only way for it to fit in there is to hammer it in - and in this case 'love''hammer.' Shikamaru as cupid is hard to get my head around, but your two protagonist needed a puzzle solver ... and who better? Well done! Some grammatical and syntax errors, a couple of mixed pronouns, but that's easy to ignore. Thanks for the read. jsm
Guest chapter 7 . 8/25/2013
K chapter 7 . 4/6/2013
I loved this fic!
I had the feels 3
NaruSaku24 chapter 7 . 3/2/2013
Great story.
Sakura478 chapter 7 . 5/15/2012
Very sweet
rikki shiratori chapter 7 . 2/28/2012
awwww... i just love how shika played matchmaker here :) updates on yout other story too, please!
powerofmicrofibre chapter 7 . 9/17/2011
Riniuchiha chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
So I'm sorry but I just had to laugh

at the "she's wearing the same clothes as yesterday" thought! Don't they all wear the same clothes everyday lol but other than that I really like this story so far
XxCaseyXx59 chapter 7 . 4/21/2011
I must say you wrote one emotionally dramatic story here and I was beginning to get frustrated at Sakuras thick head which tempted me to stop reading. I was so drawn into it I couldnt stop and I am glad you ended it on a good note. I cant tell how many stories that I just gave up on reading because they dragged on and on with nothing but mellow dramatic rambling. It reminded me of daytime soap operas lol but you did a great job with this. Keep up the good work/ chapter 7 . 4/16/2011
Oh my god that was actually amazing :):)):):) thank you :) xxx
HalfFallenAingyl chapter 6 . 4/2/2011
The only complaints I have so far are just whinings about punctuation and spelling, but then again, I'm a stickler like that, so pay no mind to me :p You've done a wonderful job, especially for a first story! I give you 2 thumbs up and a bag of Skittles, 'cause they're my favorite kind of candy :) If you ever need any(more?) beta readers, I submit my name for consideration!
naruzgirl4evahz chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
i loved this story i can tell you put a lot of time and effort into it! XD


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