Reviews for Undeserving
mashiro.x.shiina chapter 7 . 4/16
This really seems like something Sakura would go through. She always has had issues thinking she isn't ever good enough, and I think she would definitely go through a stage of that in a situation like this. Good job!
dzad chapter 7 . 1/16
Good story. A bit repetitive and I can see a few stolen scenes in here (s'okay). but what's important is that you did a good job of writing the story of two people in love who find that being lovers can often be like fitting a square peg into a round hole. The only way for it to fit in there is to hammer it in - and in this case 'love''hammer.' Shikamaru as cupid is hard to get my head around, but your two protagonist needed a puzzle solver ... and who better? Well done! Some grammatical and syntax errors, a couple of mixed pronouns, but that's easy to ignore. Thanks for the read. jsm
Guest chapter 7 . 8/25/2013
MHDEN IS A PERVERT
K chapter 7 . 4/6/2013
I loved this fic!
I had the feels 3
NaruSaku24 chapter 7 . 3/2/2013
Great story.
Sakura478 chapter 7 . 5/15/2012
Very sweet
rikki shiratori chapter 7 . 2/28/2012
awwww... i just love how shika played matchmaker here :) updates on yout other story too, please!
powerofmicrofibre chapter 7 . 9/17/2011
awwhh!
Riniuchiha chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
So I'm sorry but I just had to laugh

at the "she's wearing the same clothes as yesterday" thought! Don't they all wear the same clothes everyday lol but other than that I really like this story so far
XxCaseyXx59 chapter 7 . 4/21/2011
I must say you wrote one emotionally dramatic story here and I was beginning to get frustrated at Sakuras thick head which tempted me to stop reading. I was so drawn into it I couldnt stop and I am glad you ended it on a good note. I cant tell how many stories that I just gave up on reading because they dragged on and on with nothing but mellow dramatic rambling. It reminded me of daytime soap operas lol but you did a great job with this. Keep up the good work/
whatever.you.love chapter 7 . 4/16/2011
Oh my god that was actually amazing :):)):):) thank you :) xxx
HalfFallenAingyl chapter 6 . 4/2/2011
The only complaints I have so far are just whinings about punctuation and spelling, but then again, I'm a stickler like that, so pay no mind to me :p You've done a wonderful job, especially for a first story! I give you 2 thumbs up and a bag of Skittles, 'cause they're my favorite kind of candy :) If you ever need any(more?) beta readers, I submit my name for consideration!
naruzgirl4evahz chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
i loved this story i can tell you put a lot of time and effort into it! XD

luv,

naruzgirl4evahz
lnori chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Sakura's lines were repeated over and over again.
MHDEN chapter 7 . 2/25/2011
Un-satisfied Reader Writes :

Y U END IT LIKE DIS ?

You could have dragged it more ...

HELL .. you can put another chapter right here and now ...

Its easy ... few years laters ...

Sakura tells the story to her

"teenage" "Love-troubled" kids ...or my best though ...

A BOOK! .. yes .. all this is writen in a book ..

and Kakashi is reading it as a BETA reader ...

Saying how good the quality of the story is ...

and that Jiraiya would be proud of him .

Yet he would compain about the lack of SEX and Lemons

(I COMPLAIN ABOUT THAT TWO!)

Anyway ... faved because i like the story .

But , PLEASE ... I BEG YOU !

ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER .

(Preferably containing LEMON)

Best Wishes for future Stories .

MHDEN
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