Reviews for Lover's Last Stand
SailorChronos1 chapter 10 . 10/17/2011
I thoroughly enjoyed your story, although it took me a while to get all the characters straight in my head because it has been so long since I saw Hill Street Blues. The characterizations are very well done, although I had a little trouble with the prose being in present tense, but I will assume it's author's idiosyncrasy. One thing that would improve the flow is to use the horizontal line separators in between scenes. Looking forward to reading more.
baldgal chapter 11 . 6/30/2011
Great story! You captured all the characters perfectly. I finally got to watch HSB episodes on Bravo before it became the whore of reality tv.

Have you ever thought about writing a FF that solves the murder of Coffey? I watched that episode where he got killed and it would've been nice as a resolution for his character and Bates if his murder was brought to justice.

Keep writing!