Reviews for All Locked Up
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
i didnt even bother to read past where u intruduced pilars kids because it was untrue to her character ,,, EPIC FAIL!
TokioJapon chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
THIS COULD'VE BEEN SO GOOOD but...It was badly timed and should've been buffed more and a bit more detailed. This wasn't bad but not great. Everything's just said. No pauses, no silence no double spacing! It's all one motion. It's good just not buffed.


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