|Reviews for That Elusive Aha Moment|
| jadavrajvi chapter 1 . 6/28
'That elusive Aha Moment'! After reading ur fanfic...
Loved loved loved it simoly to the core...
| Shruthi chapter 1 . 6/25
Right. This fanfic is simply fantastic. By the end of reading this I was literally crying. Such a beautiful fanfic. Never read a fanfic which is this moving. Why? Why? Did u do this to me? I ship jily like hell. This one will always stay close to my heart I suppose. It's beautiful. Insanely beautiful. Never ever read a one shot which made me cry thus much. I mostly cried because of the last paragraph where James is like.. hoping a happy life. And I cried when I realized it didn't happen. Why? Why did u do this.? But kudos to u. A perfectly written fanfic. Thanks :)
| lizzzsunshine chapter 1 . 5/8
Love this! Moody's is absolutely the best. "Kiss her and move, damn it!" he shouts at them. "Or I'll kill you both myself!" Love it
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/25
I'm just gonna crawl into a hole and cry...
But seriously that was beautiful!I wish I witness love like that.
| DolphinAunt30 chapter 1 . 3/16
This was so sweet & perfect!
| leizapotter chapter 1 . 3/1
Crying. Fuck you for the whole four children and old people vision... I want it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/22
Beautiful. Just... Beautiful
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/3
How could you? This was a fantastic story up until the last paragraph because they didn't grow old together and have 4 kids. I was smiling and you had to ruin it. I loved your story, it was awesome
| fadedbluestars chapter 1 . 1/9
Wow! Normally I don't read short James/Lily stories - especially ones that are mere moments strung together in a timeline - because I like to get the full, gradual, romantic effect, but this was absolutely wonderful. The entire work felt very bittersweet (the line at the very end where James said they would celebrate their sixtieth anniversary together surrounded by their family KILLED ME). The characters were well-written, funny, very canon. You wrote everything really sensitively. Overall I really loved it. Thanks for posting :)
| emeraldblossom34 chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
This is gorgeous!
| icecatfire chapter 1 . 9/8/2015
*sighs dreamily* i'm gonna ignore the hp series. they DID do all that stuff and more. *is happily in denial*
| em38 chapter 1 . 9/5/2015
Not entirely canon I think but still BEAUTIFULLY written. I love the different perspectives and how they show the passage of time. I love that Peter is a bit of an idiot and also THAT SCENE IN THE DRESS SHOP! But also ending with James was just perfect. I loved it.
| Jily chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
I am crying so hard right now, sobbing actually. This is just so damn flangsty(fluffy and angsty). All I can think of is that every single person in this fix dies except Minnie. If I for some improbable reason owned HP I would forget the Next Generation and the Golden Trio and just write about the Marauders' Era/
| writeforeverforlife chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
I'm not crying, there's just something in my eye. I swear.
(I loved that Sirius was jealous. That was adorable.)
| CynicalSquirrel chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
This was so adorable and perfect and very well written. I'm not sure why I keep reading Jily fics because they always make me cry, but this is one of the best, if not the very best, I have read.