|Reviews for That Elusive Aha Moment|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/14
Very sweet. I really enjoyed it.
| tailysnaily chapter 1 . 2/22
okay so this is lovely and perfect and sums up how i picture everyone's view of jily very well, like esp dumbledore bc i always kind of wondered if he saw something in them, if he knew that their love would be important (and it was, bc it made harry) and omg mcgonagall's makes me so sad and happy but mostly sad bc all i can picture is her standing outside the dursley's house on oct 31 1981 and saying to dumbledore "say it isnt true dumbledore, not james and lily" bc she loved them UGH ok crying. BUT SIRIUS' MAKES ME LAUGH SO HARD LMAO. this is not my first time reading your fic and whenever i do, i crack up at the "Two bagels" bc its so ridiculous and so teenage boy sirius but also rather lovely too bc i like to think of that as sirius subconsciously knowing he loved lily too before he was really aware of it. so thank u for this fic. sorry my review is a small novel and also not much of a review but mostly me just blubbering on.
| PetalsToFish chapter 1 . 1/26
This was perfect I'm crying thank you for writing it omg my heart hurts
| Lavender5687 chapter 1 . 12/7/2016
Aww! This was so so cute and amazing! You portrayed characters perfectly and I loved it! Especially the scenes from when they were little and the last two. Adorable!
| MrsBUvidYYA chapter 1 . 10/15/2016
I just LOVED it!
Your writing style makes the picture perfect of the Marauder Era and it is perhaps one of the best of the numerous fics that I have read!
| you are my elysium chapter 1 . 9/19/2016
I love love love this story. It's beautiful, and it's a wonderful way of capturing the relationship between Lily and James as they grow up through the years together. I love the concept of the 'elusive aha moment', and I love the different character's points of views on it.
It's difficult in a one-shot to capture personalities and emotions with clarity, yet you do and it really is a joy reading this. xxx
| jadavrajvi chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
'That elusive Aha Moment'! After reading ur fanfic...
Loved loved loved it simoly to the core...
| Shruthi chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
Right. This fanfic is simply fantastic. By the end of reading this I was literally crying. Such a beautiful fanfic. Never read a fanfic which is this moving. Why? Why? Did u do this to me? I ship jily like hell. This one will always stay close to my heart I suppose. It's beautiful. Insanely beautiful. Never ever read a one shot which made me cry thus much. I mostly cried because of the last paragraph where James is like.. hoping a happy life. And I cried when I realized it didn't happen. Why? Why did u do this.? But kudos to u. A perfectly written fanfic. Thanks :)
| lizzzsunshine chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
Love this! Moody's is absolutely the best. "Kiss her and move, damn it!" he shouts at them. "Or I'll kill you both myself!" Love it
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
I'm just gonna crawl into a hole and cry...
But seriously that was beautiful!I wish I witness love like that.
| DolphinAunt30 chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
This was so sweet & perfect!
| leizapotter chapter 1 . 3/1/2016
Crying. Fuck you for the whole four children and old people vision... I want it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2016
Beautiful. Just... Beautiful
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2016
How could you? This was a fantastic story up until the last paragraph because they didn't grow old together and have 4 kids. I was smiling and you had to ruin it. I loved your story, it was awesome
| fadedbluestars chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
Wow! Normally I don't read short James/Lily stories - especially ones that are mere moments strung together in a timeline - because I like to get the full, gradual, romantic effect, but this was absolutely wonderful. The entire work felt very bittersweet (the line at the very end where James said they would celebrate their sixtieth anniversary together surrounded by their family KILLED ME). The characters were well-written, funny, very canon. You wrote everything really sensitively. Overall I really loved it. Thanks for posting :)