Reviews for Smoke Gets In Your Eyes |
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Guest chapter 11 . 7/20/2020 Really loved reading this story, youre so talented! |
Guest chapter 11 . 1/9/2017 great story! I loved it! |
Guest chapter 11 . 4/6/2016 Amazing story! I loved every second of it :) |
Guest chapter 11 . 2/13/2016 Great! Thanks for sharing! |
khazrn43 chapter 10 . 6/7/2015 You notes crack me up ***** Don't Stop Fincheling ***** |
khazrn43 chapter 11 . 6/7/2015 I've passed over this story for almost a year now and It proved to be a bone head move on my part. Absolutely stunning verbal imagery. The plot was well done. I'm glad it was set in the past inspired choices. You could really feel Finn's inner turmoil and Rachel's never ending optimism throughout. Well done. I will favorite it and recommend to all who ask ***** Don't Stop Fincheling ***** |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/27/2013 I missed this epilogue before! It was great, I loved it. I think Finn would have most definitely been reluctant to talk about his war experiences. |
Hybrid-Cookie376 chapter 11 . 5/12/2013 Finn/Rachel really isn't my pairing, but I'm a sucker for the whole historical bar/music/crime syndicate sort of stories and I loved this. I thought Finn and Rachel were great and made a sweet couple. I love how you incorporated all of the main cast into your world and I love that the bar was called McKinleys |
Sophie chapter 11 . 3/28/2013 You did a really great job with this. It had a good mixture of suspense, drama, and fluff. It's interesting to read something enjoyable of Rachel and Finn being parents. I feel a lot of fanfics don't do it justice because their personalities becoming something entirely different. But maybe that's what parenthood does, I wouldn't know. I like how you brought up the "you're better than that" phrase. It was how Rachel encouraged Finn, how Finn in turn encouraged her, and now it's passed on to their children. Very sweet ending. |
Sophie chapter 4 . 3/26/2013 This is incredibly edgy and suspenseful. You really did a great job with that Karofsky outburst scene. |
Guest chapter 10 . 3/11/2013 This was brilliant! Loved how you tied it all together in the end. |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/11/2013 Loving this story so far! I think you captured molding the characters' voices to the historical context pretty well. |
ElvenCompanion chapter 11 . 8/13/2012 AMAZING! I love just going to your page when I'm bored at work, supposed to be accomplishing something, and instead getting sucked into one of your stories. I love the first season of Glee but fell really behind with watching the second season and never caught up, so I can't read the other til I do so, but I REALLY enjoyed reading this one! I will have to catch up and read some of your other ones soon. Keep writing, love your stuff and style. |
heyitslennon chapter 11 . 7/14/2012 Still amazing. Hahah :):) |
heyitslennon chapter 10 . 7/14/2012 That was AMAZING I can't stop smiling! Fantastic :):):):):):):) |