Reviews for Smoke Gets In Your Eyes
khazrn43 chapter 10 . 6/7
You notes crack me up

***** Don't Stop Fincheling *****
khazrn43 chapter 11 . 6/7
I've passed over this story for almost a year now and It proved to be a bone head move on my part.
Absolutely stunning verbal imagery. The plot was well done. I'm glad it was set in the past inspired choices. You could really feel Finn's inner turmoil and Rachel's never ending optimism throughout. Well done. I will favorite it and recommend to all who ask

***** Don't Stop Fincheling *****
Guest chapter 11 . 7/27/2013
I missed this epilogue before! It was great, I loved it. I think Finn would have most definitely been reluctant to talk about his war experiences.
Alyssa Halliwell chapter 11 . 5/12/2013
Finn/Rachel really isn't my pairing, but I'm a sucker for the whole historical bar/music/crime syndicate sort of stories and I loved this.

I thought Finn and Rachel were great and made a sweet couple. I love how you incorporated all of the main cast into your world and I love that the bar was called McKinleys
Sophie chapter 11 . 3/28/2013
You did a really great job with this. It had a good mixture of suspense, drama, and fluff. It's interesting to read something enjoyable of Rachel and Finn being parents. I feel a lot of fanfics don't do it justice because their personalities becoming something entirely different. But maybe that's what parenthood does, I wouldn't know. I like how you brought up the "you're better than that" phrase. It was how Rachel encouraged Finn, how Finn in turn encouraged her, and now it's passed on to their children. Very sweet ending.
Sophie chapter 4 . 3/26/2013
This is incredibly edgy and suspenseful. You really did a great job with that Karofsky outburst scene.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/11/2013
This was brilliant! Loved how you tied it all together in the end.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/11/2013
Loving this story so far! I think you captured molding the characters' voices to the historical context pretty well.
ElvenCompanion chapter 11 . 8/13/2012
AMAZING! I love just going to your page when I'm bored at work, supposed to be accomplishing something, and instead getting sucked into one of your stories. I love the first season of Glee but fell really behind with watching the second season and never caught up, so I can't read the other til I do so, but I REALLY enjoyed reading this one! I will have to catch up and read some of your other ones soon. Keep writing, love your stuff and style.
heyitslennon chapter 11 . 7/14/2012
Still amazing. Hahah :):)
heyitslennon chapter 10 . 7/14/2012
That was AMAZING I can't stop smiling! Fantastic :):):):):):):)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
maggie
luafontes chapter 11 . 5/6/2012
another adorable story! i'm reading all your fics and lovind it!
Amybf19 chapter 11 . 4/11/2012
That was an excellent story well crafted, good plot, wonderful characterizations, excellent setting. I enjoyed it immensely!
myeveryday chapter 11 . 2/5/2012
Aw, I absolutely loved this! I loved the characters, I loved the story, and I absolutely ADORED the ending! I even cried a little bit. It was so sweet. You're an amazing writer, and I can't wait to read what else you have!
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