Reviews for Mating season
MysticChemyst chapter 3 . 1/26
Okay just...no. I'm really sorry. I mean, the writing is not actually THAT bad, but it's so incredibly disconcerting to just be thrown into (for lack of a better word) the porn. There's little to no back-story and while I understand it's (basically) a collection of one-shots, I truly believe you could have done a better job. It's very choppy and contrived, especially since it's their "first" time. It plays out like a shitty porno movie. Neither Lucy or Levy are the kinds of girls to just throw themselves into a fully physical relationship with little to no actual romancing or dating or whatever you want to call it.

Regardless, you do appear to have some talent and you could improve a lot with some work. Thank you for the time you spent to write this. I may sound harsh, but I do understand the courage it can take to put a story out there for others to read.
elm.molina23 chapter 1 . 11/22/2016
Need inspiration? listen to, Holy Ghost by Borns, Great Song
Lucy McNair chapter 4 . 8/27/2016
No way how can you move from Lucy And natsu sex moment, Strate to Levy's And Gijeel sex moment. Sweetheart you got a damn strate problem.

Well peace out!

Aphmau please subcribe to my channel.

Thanks. Bye
Guest chapter 3 . 8/13/2016
Awwwww, thats adorable! I hope it works out! Good luck!
Nashi Dragneel12354 chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
awwwww so sweeeet
Guest chapter 4 . 7/8/2016
Oh my god they are going to get married

Natsu and Lucy are bound but I don't think gajeel gave levy his mark yet so therefore gajeel never claimed levy as his but they are the perfect couple

I wish I was Lucy right now u know being with the hottest dragon slayer ever!
And getting married to him!
Natsu is my dream husband!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2016
Sorry but the nalu chapters were much more interesting
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
Wow Natsu must jumped right in and it is clear to see Lucy WAS a virgin
KoalaCurlyFries chapter 4 . 7/5/2016
This would be a bit better if you wern't a pornographic but it was kinda cute also it would be a Gale not a Gajeelevy! Or Galevy 5oo thumbs up
The Fairy Queen chapter 2 . 6/19/2016
Her eyes are brown not blue.
Love guide Mira chapter 4 . 6/11/2016
This story is really great, and about that dancer... I hope u confess to her asap if u haven't done it yet! Personally i like the kind of "princess and dragon" thingy but when the dragon and the princess are in love instead of fighting! Anyways hope that u write new stories soon! See Ya
Random Child chapter 3 . 5/25/2016
DAD, MOM
YOU DIRTY PERVS!?
(Chappy 3)
Nashi Dragneel chapter 2 . 5/25/2016
...
...Y-You two as parents suck...you wrote a book based on perverted and demented stuff...
Aunt Erza can I cuss now?
Erza: ...hai(yes)
WHAT THE FUCK
Nashi Dragneel chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
WHAT THE FUDGE MOM AND DAD!?
Thanks for scarring me...
(First chappy)
sassykitten1701 chapter 3 . 4/24/2016
oh wow...i think this one might've been just a touch better than the last one...hot damn...
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