Reviews for Don't Let Go
tenshi noyo Ryu Taiga chapter 1 . 2/3/2017
This was super interesting. Scary as all hell; my heart was racing, just like Layla's. I know this is super old, but it would be so interesting to see more of this. What happens to Eric? It's a true fact that police can't really do anything about stalkers. What will Layla and the others do? This has the makings of a really scary story. I wish there was more.
Tessa chapter 1 . 9/5/2016
I really liked your story and I think you did a great job. I think Layla's reaction was quite realistic, as I was in a similar (though less creepy) situation recently. I was in a psych hospital, and there was this really creepy guy in the room next to me. A day after he was admitted, he started going into other people's bedroom, even though that wasn't allowed. I was on leave and came back to find some of the things in my room had been moved. Later on that night, he kept on opening my door while I was in there and watching me. I eventually got the nurses to the lock the door but every ten minutes or so he would rattle the door knob. I was terrified. I felt sick for hours and couldn't sleep. All I could think about was what he might have done the night before. I'm a heavy sleeper, so he could have come into my bedroom and done almost anything to me or my I was reading this fic, I felt like I could empathize with Layla.

Sorry for the weird anecdote. Feel free to ignore it.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Good job
Catharmel chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Kudos. No, I thought she seemed pretty realistic, and was able to keep calm and incapacitate him. Nice work.
DragonHeart89 chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Loved it so far, please post more
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
that was good you should continue it
abandonedaccount451 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
heheheh wait
WHAT!
STALKER STALKER
DEAR GOD GET YOUR GUNS
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AND YOUR WARRENS
THEY'LL PROTECT YOU
P,S GREAT STORY
want2bemassie111 chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
I loved it! Must it only be a one-shot?
DeathByTorchwood chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
This was nice but there were some errors. Like, you used "principle" instead of "principal." I suggest running it through a spell check.
Yamibara chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
I really like this story and this is perfect of why, Edward from Twilight is creepy, it's not romantic or noble to break and enter my home just to watch me sleep. It's crime and you're stalker. I really enjoyed how upset everyone was and their characters concern. I wish there was more, but it's a one shot XD Great Job.
Bella chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Awww Warren is so protective it cute oh I need to know what happens
Paper Poppet chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
That was so sweet! But I want a sequel...
Cyd the Squid chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
I really liked the story. I'd love to see a sequel to see how Eric is dealt with.
angie chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
make more ! i love it ! it was amazing ! it would be awesome if he kidnappe layla and then warren kick his ass XD yeah
HannaDee1616 chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Heyy! Soo this fanfiction might be the best one on Warren and Layla that I have read so far...I love that you went with something completely off of imagination rather than just rewriting the story so that Layla and Warren end up together. (This happens a lot, and theyre still good but not nearly as creative.) Good Job! Keep up the good work!
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