|Reviews for Breathless|
| Shibby-One chapter 4 . 9/7
This story fucked me up. But in a good way? I'm just fucked form this. It FLOORED me. I spent all day reading it and ignoring things like my full-time job and family and friends. I COULD NOT get it fast enough. I'm about to read the sequel, and I am ECSTATIC. My friend, I sincerely hope you are still writing somewhere in some capacity, because you are GIFTED.
| ellie chapter 1 . 9/5
whoa. that was amazing! it was a little intense which was just perfect and the realistic atmosphere of the entire story was almost shell shocking, you really have a gift. i loved your takes on alfred and arthur's more human personalities (i like reading a good been there done that kind of fanfiction where the characterization doesnt have to be deep, but i LOVE when authors incorporate their own types of human or more realistic takes on these characters' exaggerated personalities in these human aus!)
| NordicsAwesome chapter 4 . 8/26
This story is bloody brilliant. The characters are so realistic, especially the way that Alfred hides his problems so well. I love it
| RantingFangirl chapter 4 . 6/7
I loved this so much! Wonderful job!
| Inky-Paws chapter 4 . 5/8
Absolutely stunning, amazing job, keep up the great work!
| BeccaRave chapter 4 . 5/2
love love love
| belagay chapter 1 . 1/14
This is one of my favorite fanfictions EVER, great job!
| magiclaud chapter 4 . 1/8
Oh, damn. *slowly starts clapping* That was magnificent, you know that? *goes to curl on her bed while listening to 90s punk bands*
| Shin.Miyagami chapter 4 . 11/18/2016
I just started crying really hard at the end
This story was so sad yet so so..I don't know...it was beatiful...I'm at lost for words but I wanted to rewiev to let you know what a fantastic fic that was and how I totally fell in love with it...I loved the way they both more and more fell deeper into their friendship and ohhh when Al said that Arthur looked at him different from the beginning..I coulnd't stop my tears...The only thing I have to dislike is the lack of crying on Arthurs part...not to sound like"Make arthur depressed to" is the one with the Arthur started to care more and more for him and I would've though he would totally start crying when Alfred disappeared but.I loved the story was perfect in any meaning.
Sorry for the long rewiev.I'm totally reading your sequell now.
| Wowtsw chapter 2 . 11/2/2016
This fic was a journey.
| Saaemi chapter 4 . 10/18/2016
It was awesome! Thank you very much for writing it! :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/6/2016
I... I don't really know what to say. It's three am and I'm just now realizing that because of how enthralled I was in this beautiful story. It was well written, I enjoyed how in character it was, it wasn't even like reading a story at times. You did what only a few people can so sucessfully do. You made me do more than read words on my phone, you made me feel the emotions. Whatever England was feeling that's how I felt. Worry, curriosity, suspense. You made me envision what the words were telling me. Not just take them in dully. I can't praise this beautiful story enough. I have slightly mixed feelings on the shipping aspect, part of me wanted a bit more of the sappy stuff but honestly it wasn't even needed. You made them develop so well that as much as I wanted that hug there or that kiss at the end, it didn't quite fit. I will deffinitly be returning later to read the sequel, I can't wait for it. I really really did love this story. I have a thing for angst and you excecuted it well. You made it clear without it becoming overbearing or smudging the characters. I'm tired and these compliments probably sound really dumb, but oh well. I guess i'll leave it at you're an amazing wuthor and this is a beautiful story. Wonderful job! I knpw this is old so I hope you read this simply because I want you to know that you created something to be proud of. Again, great job. And thank you
| Sky2high101 chapter 4 . 4/24/2016
ugh i love it orz I actually have a friend who went through almost the exact same thing. Makes me wonder if you do too. All of the freak out moments he has, all of the reactions arthur has. you hit it spot on. The story itself didn't make me cry but the feelings you were able to bring back did. This is amazingly written and deserves all the favorites and follows that it gets. About to start Static now and really looking forward to it :) Thanks for a story that shows there are other people that know the struggles too :)
| llll chapter 4 . 3/22/2016
| Clichegeek16 chapter 4 . 3/6/2016
I do not know if this is the end but it was a great story and I hope for a continuation! I quite enjoyed the wording, though it was hard to follow at points you had amazing cliffhangers and also very well planned out plots! Well done