Reviews for What Lies Beyond Ever Grande
Alex The Rogue chapter 13 . 5/2
Ridiculous, but way too cute and incredibly hot not to be awesome.
Guest chapter 13 . 2/26
This is a little.. off topic (not really) but how come in every yaoi fanfic I read I never see any docking? Lol Pretty weird question but think about it.
legendofpanties chapter 7 . 1/3
This chapter is hard to head, the format looks a bit messed up.
legendofpanties chapter 5 . 1/3
What... what about Brendans pokemon?
legendofpanties chapter 2 . 1/3
Brendan is quite the asshole.I wasn't expecting that, but it definitely makes the story more interesting.
legendofpanties chapter 1 . 1/3
This is pretty adorable. This chapter was the perfect length, and it was entertaining. I love how he called his Aron Princess xP
grandshadowseal chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
reminds me of mornings! only the Aron is my dog... she'll jump on me to wake me up and she's not exactly small! XD
Featherstorm27 chapter 13 . 12/24/2014
Aww this fic was super cute and sweet; I'm gonna get cavities from that ending, damn...

Cool plot, I really liked how it developed. Also, can I just say that I love how your Brendan wasn't really overpowered, he was just a regular trainer? Everyone always makes protagonists to be op because you play as them, but making Brendan an average trainer was a nice, realistic addition. Also the smut in the last chapters was great. Man, there are so many other things I want to point out that are awesome about this fic, but then I'd have a really long list! So in a nutshell, thanks for a wonderful read!
EchoSkies chapter 13 . 12/9/2014
Being perfectly honest, I never had played the original Pokemon Ruby and Saphires (basically keeping me away from this lovely couple). I love the shifts in perspectives throughout the story! Also, it's absolutely amazing how Brendan goes to Unova and finds the perfect stone for Steven! (My little heart's still swooning) I like how both of their dad's are just supportive (Steven's dad is verbally ironic..haha!)
The smut is hot and I like how Brendan's just like, "Yes I dream for the Champion to f*** me and ***************!" (Yeah...I don't have much of an imagination) I'm really glad that I stumbled upon this story and it makes me want to restart my Omega Ruby game.
To conclude, this story is absolutely fantastic and you (the author) are amazing with your writing skills! Thank you for this wonderful story!
werehogdog chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
Aww! Aron is only one year old how cute!
werehogdog chapter 13 . 12/1/2014
Cute story I loved it!
werehogdog chapter 3 . 12/1/2014
Oh I can't wait to see Brendan's surprise when he finds out who the Champion is.
Great chapter!
C.B. Magique chapter 13 . 1/5/2014
This story is so beautiful! The romance is actual perfect. I love it. I love you for writing this.
Scarlet Viola chapter 13 . 1/4/2014
Thank you so much ;A; it's so good! You brought out the awesomeness that is Steven Stone, there certainly needs to be more fics about him! You did splendid! /()/ hug!
Evil Kitten1 chapter 13 . 1/1/2014
Amazing story - and the part when brought up the marriage equality issue really touched me. It takes an exceptional writer like you to make readers feel connected with real-world issues that are similar in the story, even if its fictional.

And oh my gosh - you wrote Wallace's character amazingly! 3 You also effectively created a character that everybody would dearly love to treasure as their best-ever friend 3

Whatever fanfic you write from now on, I wish you the best, and I'm definitely keeping this story in my favourites list xxx
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