Reviews for Lost
Reviewee chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Actually quite good, but make sure (if you continue) that your self-insert has reasonable flaws too. Please don't make it into a Mary-Sue! You are doing such a good job!
Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
The topknot is stupid looking, I hate it.("why am I saying it like that? I hate it.") And Dev is quite good looking, good good combo!

Yeeeaah, Cora. Good name choice. Twas a good idea to mix humor in (don't you dare make fun of my old english usage...thing. I will /end/ you.)

So yeah, good start. Grammar or spelling mistakes, you? PUH-LEEZ. No, I'm not being sarcastic. Shock!Horror!