|Reviews for Desperate Times|
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
| yellow 14 chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Just change the pilot;D Have to love the approach to safety. Very good, keep writing
| Stuch chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Your tenses are a little all over the place - a problem I have myself - and perhaps a little too heavy on the dialogue cliches but hey, I liked it.