Reviews for Quoth the Raven, Nevermore |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just struck me… The Crown now knows that Sirius was falsely imprisoned…. But nothing has been done yet? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’m honestly confused why anyone would take offense at The Morrigan. She's a powerful Goddess. Whatever do they expect? In that vein, I love that Snape and Harry will be on the same side and that The Morrigan called him her darkness. So good. I can’t put this story down. It’s addicting and I fear I will be reading “Just one more chapter” then just one more later tonight. Kudos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is pulling on my heartstrings! I love the backstory you've created and seeing Hermione and John Hadrian connect as the small, lonely, and very smart kids they are unexpectedly choked me up. Lonely little kids who need a friend and find it in each other. Guhhh. Very effective. I also love the relationship he has with the Queen and The Morrigan. Don’t usually comment until the end of a story, but I had to leave kudos here. ️️ |
![]() ![]() Excellent piece of storytelling, one of the best I've read in a while I don't really read a lot of straight Harry Potter story's, it's normally crossovers I read but this was good reading. I hope you continue doing such good work in the future. |
![]() ![]() I know you said no sequels, but what about targeted spinoffs? The training Scrapper got from ravens, both Tower & Blackwood wilds? |
![]() ![]() Luv ya to bits, but your grammar sometimes makes me wince. The both used above, for instance should neither as the definitions are opposites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fanfic is like a bedtime story told by an old nanny. Too bad I don't care for this type of story so, ta-ta! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have no idea what this chapter was about. Bunch of muggles found an injured bird and then Dumbdumb had an alarm in his office? So fricking what? As far as introductions go, this was very vague. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is something i don't understand in both JK and Fan fiction world. Hogsmeade is owned by the Hogwarts school, some include the whole valley. Why not use words at Hogmead to protect the town and people. The only thang that could be left out is the platform since it is at the edge of town. Love the Queen protecting idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story! |
![]() ![]() That the students call her Madam Umbridge is telling. Because a teacher she ain't. "That awful boy! A halfblood no less" Well, just like her, right? :-) |
![]() ![]() I loved that you made the bullets Ben shot disappearing. The British may not be experienced with gunshot wounds, and magicals even far less, but Snape, as much as I generally loathe him, is not stupid. He's a halfblood, he would have found them in the wounds and known what it was. Even Riddle would. As it is, the holes are mysterious. |
![]() ![]() "Alright, old man. I am Harry Lord Potter, Duke of Gryffindor. You are to address me as 'Your Grace'! If you address me with inappropriate familiarity again, you peasant, I will beat you up. I wonder if your kneecaps like to be dislocated. That was the only warning you will get from me, after you were reminded by my batman already. If you do not cease your stupidity, you will regret it." I would so much like to see Dumbledore get a thorough beating for his Merlin-damned "Harry, my boy" for once. And a trial for magical attacks on a high-ranking Lord, because he had no right to cast any spell on Harry, not even tracking and listening, far less mind manipulation. He just did as he wanted, again, and "lawful" be damned, and never gets his due immediately. That criminal wanker! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! thank you for sharing it. |