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Aww, poor Eugene. This was very sweet and I loved Eugene's internal monologue throughout; going from being terrified at being a father to actually wanting to press for children. So adorable. :)

That is so cute! Ohmygod! I almost started crying at this cuteness! ACK! So cute!

Whew. You did such a good job building up to the last scene that I was disappointed right along with Eugene. It was too obvious to be true, but I still really, really wanted it to be true.

Also, the image of Eugene not opening the journal was the best: "He held the journal with his left hand and placed his right hand on the cover. Holding the journal far apart from his body, he cracked the cover open, wincing and turning his head to the side. Only as he did that, his eyes clamped shut." I laughed.

That was certainly a good development for this story.
Although I guess everyone's gotta be as excited for them to parents as I do.
Nice

This was pretty funny.

*Goes on for two year and a half days* HAHAHAHAHA!1 Hahaha... oh wow...Eugene... Just, wow...

'A pig? He'd mistaken a pig for his child?'

Perfect. Best line EVER XD I love Eugene here! So adorably smug and stupid :)

That made my heart swell. So sweet.

LOL, just great story ! poor Eugene, I can see his face ! so funny ! I love the end, finally, he loves kids LOL

I love how you write, both the style itself and the way you handle the characters. Eugene is his usual cocky, smooth self, with some softened edges as would be expected after marriage and palace life, and Rapunzel is great too, just naive enough for having spent the majority of her life in a tower, but not overly so, while still curious and intelligent.

Seeing Eugene trying to piece all the clues together and driving himself crazy was fantastic and funny. By the time he had confronted Rapunzel about his suspicions, I was in hysterics. Oh, and the ending was lovely.

Awww - poor Eugene.

Your Tangled fics are making me smile so much my face hurts.

Awww... poor Prince Eugene... and it figures he'd be the one to freak out, but then be like "dude, you're being DUMB" and then have his hopes and dreams crushed because what he was sure was happening actually wasn't...

I'd like to see Rapunzel's reaction to his question though :D

OMG so cute!

I loved it! And the ending said sequel all over it. Very adorable, and Pascal can beat him in a chess game! Ha! Here, have a well deserved cookie!