Reviews for Travels with the Doctor
Frankie.fleur chapter 3 . 8/24/2012
I really like how you've written this fanfic, however I think you might have used too much speech, and not enough of how Rose feels and thinks and what she can see/smell/hear that really brings a story to life for me.

Good luck!

Stardust x
Frankie.fleur chapter 2 . 8/24/2012
I really like that you mentioned Rose's first encounter at the beginning, because it was at the end for the doctor on the show, so it brings us more into Rose's perspective, it really works :) I was doing a fanfiction about this scene, because it's when The Doctor really got to say goodbye to Rose, and move on anyway, I hope all goes well for your writing!

Stardust :) x