Reviews for A Whole Lotta Trouble
Guest chapter 12 . 4/22
THAT was bellas goodbye? "You make me so smiley baby"

WTF?
Guest chapter 10 . 4/22
Edwards POV is written like hes a woman. He thoughy god took his EX because he ...didn't deserve the love she showed him?...SERIOUSLY? WTF?
Guest chapter 9 . 4/21
THAT is a lot of ghosts to take on, especially for a rebound. I'm kinda thinking that is WAY too much baggage for a college graduate that just got cheated on the day she was planning to marry someone else.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/21
Edward had a kid with someone else? eww...no thanks.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/21
wtf? "no eddie I don't speak French but I sing in, Russian, German, Latin, French, Chinese, Japanese, Spanish, Czech, and fucking sign language...you like?"

You just went alittle far ya know? And she sounded like a stuck up braggy cunt.
Kgunter34 chapter 27 . 10/28/2016
But, did you die? Cause it's shitty to leave folks hanging.
gleefan2009 chapter 27 . 4/11/2016
love it please write more
Anon chapter 5 . 3/27/2016
Just realized the contradiction, if Bella needs the photo for evidence why did she throw the phone away? Unless between leaving Whoreob's room and the hotel lobby she emailed it to herself.
elizabeth bennette chapter 1 . 2/8/2016
Can you tell your blog name? Thanks
darksoulwu chapter 27 . 9/28/2015
I really loved this story. Two bad life gets in the the way aand thing never get done. Thanx
Thanks again for writinting it.
Byrd3-13 chapter 27 . 7/15/2014
Didn't Bella JUST say they were going to wait to get married so no one would think the pregnancy had something to do with it?
BrownEyeConni93 chapter 27 . 1/5/2014
Hope you can continue this story! I didnt want to stop reading... It was really heartfelt.. I really LOVED this story :)
bakedrice07 chapter 27 . 12/26/2013
Hope you continue the story...I know it's been a bout a year but this is a good story.
Guest chapter 27 . 12/1/2013
Good story make new chapters
mskathy chapter 27 . 5/18/2013
Love Charlie giving Edward the ring, and the proposal.

"I want so badly to be a good mother, and the fact that I have no frame of reference for that scares me shitless. I hope I am enough." - I think we all feel that way, or most of us.

Very yummy, sweet, and swoony way to end this story.

Thank you for writing and sharing this journey!
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