Reviews for A Whole Lotta Trouble
girlygirl0706 chapter 24 . 10/10/2011
Thanks for the update. Edward's gonna be a daddy YaY!
Vivi H88 chapter 24 . 10/10/2011
great chapter :)

Can't wait till the next one
darcysmom chapter 24 . 10/10/2011

Mechanicward is also going to be Daddyward? My heart is all aflutter. I am not sure it gets much better than that.

I'm really looking forward to the scene where they share their news with Carlisle and Esme. :)


secretobsession7 chapter 23 . 10/2/2011
This story has been fabulous! I love your writing!
Starlite37 chapter 23 . 8/18/2011
Loved every word! What a great way to spend my day off.
dckdck422 chapter 23 . 8/17/2011
More Please
omgrpatzluvr chapter 3 . 8/12/2011
I'm loving your story. Bella is so funny. Edward sounds very HOT! Thanks for Sharing!:-):-):-)
zdra8351 chapter 23 . 8/12/2011
Awsome story, cant wait to read more.
CherylSab chapter 20 . 8/10/2011
Squee! They're going home! But I can't help but feel bad for Alice. I hope she has lots of friends so she won't be too lonely without B. Too bad there wasn't 2 kitties so Alice could have kept one. Bella needs to lose her phone so Alice will need to call and talk to jazz. ;p
CherylSab chapter 18 . 8/10/2011
They get the condoms from Alice and then go to sleep? Bwahahaha. Does this mean we're getting knocked up sooner than later? We know the original E has some killer swimmers. :p
CherylSab chapter 16 . 8/10/2011
I liked that Charlie didn't give her too hard of a time about leaving Jake and hooking up with E so soon after.

Loved that he wanted an in n out skype date (I miss in n out SFM!)

E handled himself well around Charlie. I think he won him over :) I like supportive Charlie and not an intimidating one. Good job!
CherylSab chapter 14 . 8/9/2011
Oh shit! I should have known Jake would have shown up somewhere eventually...I just didn't expect him so soon and without causing problems on his side. Yay for Emmett! He didn't hesitate at all on that punch. :) Just wish Jake would have gotten his ass kicked more than that.
CherylSab chapter 13 . 8/9/2011
She made him cry when she left :( That was heartbreaking.

But then he doesn't answer the phone? This worries me. How can they be secure in a long distance relationship if he's already missing scheduled phone calls? I can see I'm not getting much sleep
CherylSab chapter 12 . 8/9/2011
*sniff* I can't believe she really left. They call each other such cute little names all the time, it's so sweet.

"Why is it that I am always in bed when you want to take my picture, Bella? It's a little bit suspicious, baby girl."-Duh! LOL I loved that line.

Ok, must keep reading so they will be back together...soon!
CherylSab chapter 11 . 8/9/2011
I love that you have a sweet supportive Rose in your fic. She's awesome here.

I'm trying to brace myself for some sadness coming up...I'm kinda scared to keep reading.
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