|Reviews for Cavaldi's Rescue of Will|
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
| Brainfreezer chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
actually this is my first review on , so if I'm talking complete nonsense or you can't understand what I want to say, please forgive me, I'm not a native speaker...but I think, this story is totally worth it, that I dare to write a review! :D
I liked your story very much, because you have a really good writing style and I loved how you wrote the parts in the Cavaldi-ish accent! (Like Grimm-y. Altough I think, but don't remember it properly, that he just used "Grimm-y" when he talks about both of them, because "-i" is the Italian plural form for, like...anything. ;) )
Also his mental leaps, like "from lady lovers to little ladies" were very nice to read. All in all reading your story was like sitting in Cavaldi's head, it was totally comprehensible that he would think in this way.
I'm very happy that somebody wrote a story about Cavaldi, because Peter Stormare was actually the reason why I watched this movie. It was really difficult to understand, why he turns out to be a good guy at the end. So, if you got more explanations about this certain problem...write! :D
Sincerely yours*, Brainfreezer )
*sorry...can't think of any informal English passing formula...