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Esther Clemmens chapter 6 . 11/5/2012
I cried when she said goodbye to Haji, but I knew she'd want to live on so she could defend her family against Nathan.
Esther Clemmens chapter 5 . 11/5/2012
Wow! That was awesome! I can't wait to see what Saya chooses to do.
Esther Clemmens chapter 3 . 11/5/2012
I can't stand Amshel. Great idea using him here, though.
Esther Clemmens chapter 2 . 11/5/2012
Too sad. She has to choose between life and death and Haji's dead? This is so sad. Poor Saya.
newmew4you chapter 6 . 6/22/2011
OH NO IM GUNNA CRY
Zizichan96 chapter 6 . 6/8/2011
WOW this is amazing. 0.0

I honestly could not even begin to guess how you were going to end it, and I was kinda afraid it wouldn't turn out so well, but IT IS SO GOOD! :D

love holed up with that bastard too, can't wait til you finish XD congrats on finishing!
XxxCrimson FatexxX chapter 6 . 6/7/2011
AWWWW! I loved the first part! It was sooo sweet! I really wish this wasn't the end! And your story wasn't boring it was really good!
XxxCrimson FatexxX chapter 5 . 6/7/2011
Wow! This chapter was amazing! Forget what i said in my last review about the description because it was all so AWESOME! (sorry, just an awesome chapter)
Zizichan96 chapter 5 . 5/12/2011
HURRAY! I found the time! Hell, I MADE the time to read this; IT IS SO GOOD. UWAH. I really want to know what happens next!

It was really well written this time again; it flowed really well.

Good job, hope you update soon! XD
PeaKay chapter 5 . 5/10/2011
Yay! Update!

...Your anger scares me...

ANYWAY, review time. Er, nothing really to review about. Good chapter as always. A few spelling mistakes (like "smoothe," tiny errors like that) but besides that nothing else. There was lots of description of motion and action (which I suck at) which is great. Makes everything a lot easier to picture :D

So, congrats on updating. I've also posted another chapter of RTF and I got the next halfway done. Maybe it's a sign that we are getting out of our writing ruts. I've missed writing. Missed it a lot XD LOL!

Can't wait to see what happens now...time's running out! She better make a decision soon.

-Kendell
newmew4you chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Hey this is aweshume :)
Zizichan96 chapter 4 . 3/16/2011
Wah! It's SO good- fantastic delivery again!

I love the idea, and it would be interesting to see how Saya might have reacted at different points in the anime's plot...

Can't wait for the next chapter! XD
ForeverDancerGirl chapter 4 . 3/16/2011
O. My. HAGI! I am not lying and not sugar coating when I say: this is one of the very best fanfics I have EVER read! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time and the story line is amazing and you left everyone reading (or at least me) begging for more! Please update soon, its a-maze-ing! I can't wait for chapter 5!
XxxCrimson FatexxX chapter 4 . 3/4/2011
I liked this chapter. I think it could have been better if you didn't have run on sentences and soooooo much description...it took away from the story for...sorry.

UPDATE!
XxxCrimson FatexxX chapter 3 . 1/19/2011
Bland? I think it was far from bland. I really liked it! I really wish Haji would've told Saya about that 'beast' 'cause that would've made her chose faster! lol!

update!
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