Reviews for Why The Rainbows Make Me Cry
Pandora Finesilver chapter 7 . 2/6
*wincing sharply* I. . . This whole story was a punch to the gut, I cried a little at parts, gasped in horror upon hearing about Mikey, and, and. . . This. . . This is a really good fricking story, you know that? Even if it was brief and centered more on Scout and a little on Spy, but you captured everyone really, really well in this. . . Great fracking work man, never stop being awesome!
Woof chapter 7 . 7/24/2017
Jesus Christ I was not expecting such a story. Honestly feels like a work of art, from the story to the way the characters seem to be so relatable.
Crystal25152 chapter 7 . 6/23/2016
...I had to log in because I needed to impossibly attempt to spam this as a favorite story.
Crystal25152 chapter 7 . 6/23/2016
*Is a legit user too lazy to log in*
I'm not crying, but I pretty much am at the verge on tears.
Amazing.
I've no clue what I am doing chapter 7 . 2/20/2016
Aw...why did you have to go and mess with my emotions like that, huh? Of course somebody had to go take a humorous throwaway line and make it heartbreakingly tragic. :( You've ruined that taunt (and strangely enough, the word Technicolor) for me. The hematemesis was appropriately chilling, but that does tend to be appropriately chilling either way...
I'm curious about the description of the peptic ulcers (gastric or duodenal?) as "gaping holes", though - that makes me think more of perforation than ulceration. But then again, perforation is possible with ulcers.
Anyhoo, forgive the intrusion, don't mind me, carry on _
DemonsPain88 chapter 7 . 10/3/2015
Nicely done! I think that's a great concept taken from that line!
Star Shimer chapter 7 . 7/23/2015
Good job, great storytelling from scout, although are the scouts related? if so, why are they fighting each other? these questions burn though my mind.
DetectiveRarity chapter 7 . 5/28/2015
So, was the Spy Scout's father? I'm not entirely sure. Great story, though.
2Spooky5You chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
Make more! You have an awesome style of writing!
Cake Eyes chapter 7 . 2/13/2015
Loved you fic, you write so amazingly well that it's easy to think it really is Scout telling the story. There are a couple of things I don't understand, though, namely the relationship between the teams' scouts and spies. Are they clones in your fic or how is it that the Scouts apparently both have the rainbow issue and the same mother, yet are not brothers? And why would RED Spy need to inform the other about what? I'm all confused now.
ThisisPorky.exe chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
Alright, number 1? Not cool.
Number 2. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT
3. Please
and 4. No stop it.
You've done the one thing I've always wanted to do when writing. Emotion. Like, holy mother balls, the emotion in this. And the insane amount of character kept in this, especially from Scouts side. And, come on, Spy - you need to stop being a dick-bag to your team-mates, you grumpy sod!
But seriously, I loved that ending, those last few lines, that bit with the bleeding rainbows. Man, I don't know what to say other than I bloody loved it. Not many stories get me in a "hey i wanna write long paragraphs of speech and just speech because hot diggity". And you also taught me not to rush shit just to get it out there and to just take time on chapters, cause that's not something I do well. But, my goodness, this was amazing, from start to finish.
...Sorry for this being so long.
CaptainOldDog chapter 7 . 12/18/2014
This was a lot of fun to read. Awesome story, my friend.
Kytigami chapter 7 . 9/26/2014
This was amazingly well written. It really felt like a real person telling it, but it also included details characterization, dialogue and world building that really gave it life and depth.
I have no idea how to even start to write something like that. So hats off to you for writing this.
I also started tearing up too, so it definitely had an emotional impact as well.
The ending sentence is a bit... eh. But the rest of it is amazing.
hdhd chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
Now rainbows make me cry too :'(
BONK 182 chapter 7 . 4/27/2014
Really emotionally, and with every chapter you left the readers thinking... I LOVE it!
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