|Reviews for Distorted Fairy Tale|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10
Femdom is really something I don't enjoy but I find myself unable to discount the ability you have at writing a lemon. The sense of despair and betrayal Tsukune felt at how his body reacted against his will was palpable and as much, as stated before, I dislike the whole masochistic male archetype I find that it may have some bearing in Tsukune in canon; after all, he's always putting himself in harm's way to protect others who can often times handle whatever he's sheilding them from. Also, he's a big guilt tripper and quick to blame himself for things occuring beyond his power, so how he reacts in this was rather believable.
Personal gripes aside, I like your writing style too much to stop here, so I'll bite the bullet and read on.
| The Blind Pilgrim chapter 19 . 5/30
Omg, please finish this masterpiece.
| Stratos263 chapter 2 . 4/30
| TheUndashingOne chapter 19 . 4/30
I must say that this is one of the best Rosario Vampire stories I've read by far. Your writing style is impeccable and it's excellent in terms of plot and character development. It's interesting to view Akua's slow personality change towards Tsukune and humans in general but it's at a rate that is believable and even then she is still like her canon counterpart. A minor complaint I have is that there is way less development in people like Kurumu, Mizore and Yukari who are pretty close to Tsukune. I get that the focus of the story is Moka/Tsukune/Akua but I still think the story would have benefit a bit more if they were present to witness the changes little by little. Maybe that's just me being biased though.
I surely hopes that this is continued because it is an excellent story and it would be a shame if it just ended here.
| Tower Knight chapter 19 . 4/25
I hope you update this before i die
| Anko4Life chapter 19 . 1/5
I really love this pleases continue it. and keep up the good work
| Stratos263 chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
| ElfenbeinDaemon chapter 19 . 8/16/2015
This story is absolutely fantastic. I sincerely hope it is being continued. You have managed to capture the essences of the characters and keep them consistent, a feat rarely seen. Additionally, your writing style is enjoyable and engrossing, and I hope to see more soon.
| ASimpleFan chapter 19 . 8/13/2015
I must say, this was quite possibly the best story I have read on this site. Your take on a character who was shown as a broken doll type in the manga and turning her into a truely simpethetic heroin is incredible. Also I personally like the idea of the budding feelings, not just between Akuha and Tskune, but also the slightest hints that Kulah might be growing some for Tskune as well. It would be interesting for him to have all 3 sisters with him, as he is too nice of a character to simply let Mayabi rape Kulah after their forced wedding... Honestly weather you continue this story or not is your chance, but you have a real talent for writing and do hope you decide to keep up with this fic.
| Akira-Kenzu chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
| the devil inside chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
Has anyone thought of naruto and gyokuruo and kahula stories that would be awesome
| Skullduggery Goodfellow chapter 19 . 5/25/2015
Just read through all of this; great work here. I really enjoy the interactions between Tsukune, Moka, and Akuha.
| Psyker Sieg chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
I'm sure that you get "this is incredible" all the time, but it is.
One of the best and most interesting reads I've have on this site.
Tough I do want to say, if you haven't already, you might want to upload this on a site like adultfanfiction, just to be safe, cause there are some people being seriously up tight about reporting.
Ah, I know I'm commenting on chapter 1, but I've read all the chapters. Never reviewed before because no words I had could do this justice. This could very well have been an alternate take on the series.
This was mainly just for the warning.
| maxe03 chapter 6 . 3/26/2015
Wow sounds and mom a are dumber than I th out and I'm shocked that you have the realms acting like the fake
| Anlanther chapter 19 . 3/3/2015
Great chapter! For a moment there, since you spent a lot of time on Moka's POV, I was so sure that you would leave us hanging on the ledge of that previous cliff-hanger. Every time you moved on to a different part of the chapter, I became increasingly worried that you would not talk about Akuha and the crew at all and leave us hanging off a really tall cliff... actually, now that I think about it, you still kinda did...
Argh, anyway, going back, again, love your writing style and where this is going. It's really interesting how different your writing style is from those that I have read so far. Very backwards, allowing for more emotion to be omitted. It's very much how I would like mine to be XP . Moving away from that, I'm so happy that Miyabi is finally out of the picture–well I hope he is–and how Moka has finally been able to escape. I actually thought she was never going to figure a way out on her own. That was, I must say, very clever of you.
And, as per usual, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'm really looking forward seeing how Akuha and Tsukune would fare on their own as well as how Moka would get her way through that island. Oh, and one last thing that I remembered only a bit ago, shouldn't drinking Akuha's blood be dangerous? I remember Moka saying that drinking a vampire's blood would be really bad for Tsukune and non-vampires in general. Or was that done on purpose? XD