Reviews for A Green Sun Illuminates the Void
droffatsstafford chapter 18 . 7/11/2018
it's good
droffatsstafford chapter 17 . 7/11/2018
Call me crazy, but I think something's rotten in the Republic of Albion.
Masterx01 chapter 24 . 7/10/2018
Well, i just finished of reading this one.

Not bad i would say.

The grammar, storytelling, imagery and prose, were all superb, if only most of the authors were half as good giving details for imagery as this i would be a very happy reader.

Althought i have against it that it somewhat lacked of... memorable(?) parts, everything is nice all, specially the parts showing her struggles and development, but it lacked of those epic moments that makes you remember it fondly.
droffatsstafford chapter 16 . 7/10/2018
Ah, yes. With this, Louise has everything she needs to take over the world.
droffatsstafford chapter 15 . 7/10/2018
droffatsstafford chapter 14 . 7/10/2018
I've been forgetting to review these last few chapters!
How shameful!

...Nothing useful to contribute, though.
droffatsstafford chapter 11 . 7/10/2018
SHE GOT LAID a man, which is the opposite of a woman, but still...

...Ahem. Never a dull moment, in your stories.
What is this "Rhyme" that Irukuwa (Irukuku? Irukukwa? idk) speaks of? I know that she's a Rhyme Dragon, but I have a feeling that this "Rhyme" is something rather... different. That is to say, something from Exalted.

"blood and breaking"
I love Freud
droffatsstafford chapter 10 . 7/10/2018
Truly, Marisalon's cause is a noble one:
Getting Louise laid by a woman.
droffatsstafford chapter 9 . 7/9/2018
Kiss the princess. Do eet. Doooooo eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.
droffatsstafford chapter 6 . 7/9/2018
Not enough make-up kisses.
...I think I have a problem.
droffatsstafford chapter 5 . 7/9/2018
Mmm, two muddy girls wrestling.
droffatsstafford chapter 4 . 7/9/2018
Marisalon is already proving to be absolutely delightful.
Hopefully, she'll be able to make Louise give in to her secret desire to ravish pure maidens.
droffatsstafford chapter 3 . 7/9/2018
Ooh, the imperial We.


Guess Siesta's grandfather taught her some lore.
droffatsstafford chapter 2 . 7/9/2018
Why was I ever worried?
You make things entertaining enough, and I'll likely be only as confused as Louise going forward.

This should be fun.

droffatsstafford chapter 1 . 7/9/2018
I'm going into this with about as much knowledge on Exalted as I had on Overlord when I began Overlady.
That is to say, barely any prior knowledge at all.

...Oh dear. I hope I won't be too terribly confused.
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