Reviews for Distraction
satomika chapter 1 . 9/20/2014


But i can't actually see Hiruma being distracted like that

It's so not him
Kumikoson4 chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
hehehehehehe It really cracked me up!
Poor Hiruma, but I have to accept that was very funny! :D good fic!
Noah's Ark the Musician chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Shina Perez chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Grammer needs to be worked, and some words needed to be added while some shouldnt have been there.

Towards the end it was pretty funny, nice way of throwing in something unexpected of Hiruma! Keep it up! :]
Bar-Ohki chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Very clever. I'm amused how both of them wound up 'injured' because of the other's actions. XD
ErisedStraehRuoy chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
This is a perfect example of a very good story that just needs a really good Beta. As I read your story, I couldn't help feeling that I would have liked it very much had I not continuously been distracted by errors in grammar and spelling.
Mt749 chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Normally, I wouldn't touch Hiruma/Mamori but the way you've tastefully written your summary and story made me. And I couldn't be more glad.
Kimmytrainer chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Kyaaaa! Super Hiruma fangirl screech! Sooooo cute! Love it!
Mitama31773 chapter 1 . 1/15/2011

Nice fic! XD
H3art Star chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Oh nice it was great i like it

nicely done

zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 1/15/2011

the devil is smited by her presence!
D'Akou'Chan chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
LOL,.. Hakakakakaka,...