|Reviews for Tale as Old as Time|
| EmilySamara chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Hmmm... I've never read or watched Beauty and the Beast so I don't exactly get this story, but you have good writing. I just wish I undestood it better. By the way... did you know that Nino was actually the one who had twins in the game or did you just want to make your own story?~~EmilySamara
| DarkBlaziken chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Hm, this is an interesting parody of Beauty and the Beast, albeit it differs somewhat from the version I know.
The Jaffar and Matt story was very nicely woven, actually.
Onesided Serra/Matt was so sweet, and YAY! You killed of my favourite character. Wait, ex-favourite. Now second favourite. Deathfics are love~ especially when Matt dies with a nice reason. Matt/Leila/Jaffar FTW man
All in all, your plot is there; it's a beautiful plot, and indeed well-thought out. What you'd probably need to work on is the description and language though, because sometimes I find it somewhat rushed and lacking in detail. Oh, and the characters (especially Jaffar) end up being a bit out of character, but I guess it's because this is a parody. The most in-character person in this entire fic, by the way, is Matt. XD Good job!
To sum up, great story, keep writing!
| Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Hehe, I'm not actually that into/knowledgable about fairy tales, but this seems pretty well written at least. Nice work man