Reviews for Broken
Readin Fanfictio chapter 1 . 5/28
Wow, that was beautiful, really good, great job. I wish there was more stories like this. :D
N Harmonic chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
you should do a sequel. like of life after he's free and healed-a oneshot!
mea.culpa.s chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
I want more. ;/
I really liked it! Congrats!
But... I NEED TO READ AN "END". hahaha
Nai Jinsei chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
ahh the good old days, reveiwing stories and reading flatline
DeletedAccount9 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
This is just purely an amazing piece of work! I cannot express how creative and amazing this was! The descriptions were also really nice and usually I tend to stay away from 1st person stories, but this one was genuinely wonderful! The way you made it seem like someone was actually talking was really good, most authors aren't able to pull that off, but you did it really well! I especially loved the ending, not corny at all! Anyway, overall a wonderful story, with a few grammer/spelling mistakes here and there, but who doesn't have those? An amazing story, great job!
conversingCorpses chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Holy shit that was epic...
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
TheOneAndOnlySuccessor chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Awwwww.. Poor Hidan this almost made me cry it was so sad... I'm happy that Shikamaru dug him up in the end and Hidan had a change of heart.. Truely beautiful
shadow0521 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
i love this story w its very well written! xDDD i actually teared up when i read how much Hidan changed and how Shikamaru offered to help, even though he still despises him! it was really nice of him! i really really encourage you to continue this story w
Tanglepelt chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
I absolutely loved this!
Bleeping Bloop chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Luv it! Ah, the begining was wicked awesome! I wonder how they are going to deal with him, though Hidan is pretty...uh messed up? Or is he normal? Either way, I can't wait for an update.

Only suggestion would be, let the swearing come in. It's already T so the cussing can be included.

gh chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
please continue this story, i wanted to see what happens to them please please please please please!