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Okay, so great story so far, but I just can't get over how you're describing the Flying Thunder God Jutsu.

You have turned Naruto into a speedster like the Flash, but that is not how the Jutsu works.

A speedster still has to cover the linear distance from point A to point B, just that he can do it many times faster than anyone can see or perceive.

FTG on the other hand, is a "space-time justu", that means, essentially teleportation, just like Kamui.

We see an example of this when Minato fought Obito on the Night of Naruto's birth. He didn't move fast to his kunai, hw teleported to it. And also, when Minato stopped the tailed beast bomb, he teleported the attack to some other place.

This "slipstream" idea you have created is more akin to Swift release, or A's lightning armour. Impressive, but not enough to get a flee-on-sight order.

It would have been better for Naruto to be able to teleport to anywhere within his chakra cloud thingy, while also letting him learn his fathers method, but this speedster thing is waayyy weaker than the true Flying Thunder God Jutsu

That being said, you do have a great story, and I'm enjoying reading it.

Okay, so great story so far, but I just can't get over how you're describing the Flying Thunder God Jutsu.

You have turned Naruto into a speedster like the Flash, but that is not how the Jutsu works.

A speedster still has to cover the linear distance from point A to point B, just that he can do it many times faster than anyone can see or perceive.

FTG on the other hand, is a "space-time justu", that means, essentially teleportation, just like Kamui.

We see an example of this when Minato fought Obito on the Night of Naruto's birth. He didn't move fast to his kunai, hw teleported to it. And also, when Minato stopped the tailed beast bomb, he teleported the attack to some other place.

This "slipstream" idea you have created is more akin to Swift release, or A's lightning armour. Impressive, but not enough to get a flee-on-sight order.

It would have been better for Naruto to be able to teleport to anywhere within his chakra cloud thingy, while also letting him learn his fathers method, but this speedster thing is waayyy weaker than the true Flying Thunder God Jutsu

That being said, you do have a great story, and I'm enjoying reading it.

This is a really good story so far. I'd love to see more of it soon hopefully.

this shit aint done right

Uma atualizada nessa história seria bom autora.

Did Tsunade become Hokage? I must of missed that part.

Will you be continuing flash fire? It's very interesting

cringe

I always find it idiotic that Hokage thinks hiding Naruto's parentage will keep him safe when he's almost a spitting image of his father. If Hokage really wanted to keep Naruto safe the least he could do was to ask Naruto to change his appearance. If not at least hide the blond hair. Otherwise, anybody who has seen the fourth could make that connection, except for the people of Konoha that is.

Well written, I love this story.

When next?

You DO realize, that the SECOND that naruto meets with a kumo shinobi or an iwa shinobi out in the field, the secret IS OUT right? So it's really kinda POINTLESS. They just have to take one LOOK at him or his bloodline OR even his last name... Any of them is going put 2 and 2 together... This fight kinda testifies to that... SO really, POINTLESS secret. 4th shinobi war? Oh please, don't be such a melodrama queen... Sarutobi sounds like a frightened mouse.