|Reviews for A Week with the Uncles|
| The-Vanilla-To-My-Butter chapter 7 . 10/5/2012
"IT'S SO FLUFFY!" "IT's SO FLUFFY I'M GONNA DIE!"
Dispicable Me. Love this.
| statkika12 chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
Awe, that's cute; I always suspected that Vlad would be a big softie with kids ;)
| Manami Miyamoto chapter 7 . 7/19/2011
| WillowRose360 chapter 7 . 5/15/2011
That was awesome! D Especially the Avatar reference. I had to sing the whole of Secret Tunnel before i could continue reading ]
| Conejo-sama chapter 7 . 5/14/2011
Cute. I didn't there could be rides like those in Corona because of the time period, but it was still fun to read
| ohsnapness chapter 7 . 5/14/2011
I LOVED IT. I loved your reference to Percy Jackson most of all, though:) You make me jealous with your amazing writing ability:)
| Lala Sharada chapter 6 . 5/14/2011
Okay, criticism on the story now, but er, this should be on Ch.7. I didn't have enough room on the other review.
It was so great! I really enjoyed it and it was all so funny and sweet! I loved how Tom tried to fly and then Annie's concern for her siblings during the water fight was so spot on. I'm the oldest of four, so I know how she felt during that.
And it was just, GAH! All of it was so great! Specially Anabelle's freakout over Stan at the carnival, that cracked me up! And Ch. 7 itself was such a fun chapter and a great end to the Uncles week with the kids! : )
Sorry, I probably sound really redundant don't I? Lol, see! That's what your stories do to me, GarvinMark! I can't help but SQEEEE! helplessly over them, they're so amazingly awesome! : )
*And it's also 4:30 in the morning where I'm at and I haven't gotten any sleep yet, so these reviews are also touched with a little sleep deprivation insanity, too, lol*
| Lala Sharada chapter 7 . 5/14/2011
Lol! Okay, so these were the references I reconized.
"It's so fluffy I'm gonna die!" Ginger exclaimed, running over to the stall and gaping up at the fluffy unicorns.
Lol, best line from "Despicable Me," along with it's accompanying "IT'S SO FLUFFY!" I love Agnes!
And Avatar the Last Airbender! Lol, "Secret tunnel! Secret tunnel!" Now I really want to watch that episode, if anything, simply for the traveling nomads.
Then, gradually, the sound of a well-tuned ukulele and perhaps a not-so-well-tuned voice began to ring out through the quietness of the tunnel.
"Two lovers—forbidden from one another—a war divides their people… And a mountain divides them apart… built a path to be together-."
Shrek! : )
"So then Stan told me all about his great Aunt Clarise's niece Fiona, explaining how she was imprisoned in a faraway castle when she was young."
'Dr. Lipschitz's Parenting Manual'
Wow, Rugrats too! that was one of my favorite shows as a kid, I watched it all the time!
How do you come up with all this stuff, all the references I mean. Does it just hit you as you're writing or do you think about it beforehand?
| Wolfram-and-Hart-Sauron chapter 7 . 5/13/2011
Great! Loved this story!
But one minor thing. In this chapter, when Tom meets Dave, he says "I'm Paul. You can call me Dave for short" and then he's still refered to as David and Dave.
But everything else was great.
| Starship Ranger chapter 7 . 5/13/2011
aw-GREAT story-I loved their afternoon at the park as well as the wonderful reference to despicable me XD-can't wait to read your other stories-your writing is entertaining and well put together-one question though-Thomas is the crown prince of Corona-but isn't Annie heir to the throne, since she is eldest?
| 4-eva-bookworm chapter 6 . 4/20/2011
Again, beautiful writing. It's just...amazing, how you write. Breathtaking. Fabulous. Adventurous. Mind-boggling...perfect, just perfectly perfect. I wouldn't be surprised if tangled were to have a second movie- with in inspiration from your movies. I wouldn't be surprised if you were #1 New Yorks best-selling author. That's how good you are. That's how much people love your stories. You can see it in the reviews. I can see it in the reviews. It is just utterly completely splendid what you do. And I hope you achieve as much in your life; I hope you reach your dreams. This site doesn't deserve you, you hold too much talent. God bless!
#1 fan :DD
| xx Sunshine Girl xx chapter 6 . 4/17/2011
Sorry, can't log in, but I just had to comment!
: ). Lol! I couldn't stop laughing and or smiling during that entire last scene with Gene and Punzie! It was so great!
"Not if your name is Oskar."*I think that's the line* lol!
Totally made my night! It was so funny!
Gosh, Garvinmark, you really do come up with incredible Tangled stories. And they're all so amazing! I'm in serious awe of your remarkable talent!
Keep on writing there, love!
| RadosianStar chapter 6 . 4/3/2011
Someone's gonna be in big trouble. Hope you update soon and that your other stories go just as well.
| shelly chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
One of the funniest, most clever and inventive stories I've ever read here. Brava!
I'm thinking Rapunzel and Eugene probably won't let the thugs near their kids or the palace ever again, if they don't kill them for making the kids blow off their lessons or getting them injured or trashing the palace. Or if Annie doesn't kill them first. But then how could you kill such adorable thugs? XD
If I may just be a bit nitpicky (constructive criticism, I swear), it's "your" palace, not "you're" (you'reyou are) and "peeked" (like peek-a-book) not "peak." Sorry, have an english degree so I had to point that out.
Don't worry though, doesn't take away from the utter brilliance of this story or your other stories. I think this one is my favorite though out of all your current stories, it's just so creative and funny, the zebra-painted table had me in stitches. Keep up the great work, can't wait to read more!
| Conejo-sama chapter 6 . 3/19/2011
HA! The ending was funny. Tom keeps getting hurt. They should keep him detained until Rapunzel and Eugene return. lol