Reviews for Just Another Day At The Office
glass in shoulder chapter 2 . 10/3/2011
well actually removing the glass would make her bleed more, especially if the glass had cut a major blood vessel and was blocking the cut. But well written so far :)
Guest chapter 4 . 9/12/2011
WAIT!The menagerie was destroyed? What about all the pour creatures?

The Columbian Mammoth!

The Dracorex!

The Kaprosuchus!

The Raptors!

Sid abd Nancy!

OH NO! REX, PLEASE,TELL ME HE'S OK PLEASE,TELL ME THEY'RE ALL OK PLEASE!
maddi-becker chapter 3 . 4/22/2011
my internet is going boddgy so it froze so i am writing this coz it wont go forward ah so frustrating but fantastic x
MrsJessicaBecker chapter 4 . 2/18/2011
Please please please please please please please update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next! I loved the heart shaped rubbers :) xxx
The Sheep Of Destiny chapter 4 . 2/13/2011
this is good but you should just break up the paragraphs a bit more
Whatever-the-weather chapter 4 . 2/7/2011
Great chapter, update soon! :)!
OzzylovestheScottie chapter 3 . 1/25/2011
please continue this its awesome!
Kizza is a RIOT chapter 3 . 1/23/2011
Hurry and update v soon plz x
Lady of Denial chapter 3 . 1/21/2011
Keep going! I love Becker and Jess! The only thing that could make this story better would be...longer chapters!

LOVE IT! :D
Cooper101 chapter 3 . 1/21/2011
Great chapter.

Update soon please.
Squabble chapter 3 . 1/20/2011
Oh hell. That's not good.

My favorite part of this chapter would be the heart shaped rubbers :3 cute

Update soon!
Don't Try To Change My Melody chapter 3 . 1/20/2011
Suspense is killing me! Update soon please! Great job so far!
My Idle Hand chapter 3 . 1/20/2011
Oh, this is bad for them!

Even without a gun, I'm sure Becker would have find a way to kill the raptors with the pens or the staplers, because he's just awesome like that! And now I want to read "The guide of how to kill a dinosaur with Office Supplies, by H. Becker" or something. It could be awesome and really funny if somebody ever write that. But sorry , I'm completely off topic.

I like how he though about cheering Jess up. Nice update :)
Kizza is a RIOT chapter 2 . 1/19/2011
Great it sooo good cant wait 4 the nt update x
Fandom-Desires chapter 2 . 1/19/2011
Nice chapter!

Only one small thing though; It would've been better to have left the glass in Jess' shoulder. The glass would've been preventing most of the blood flow. Removing the glass would increase it and possibly damage her shoulder further as well and increasing the risk of death from lack of blood.

Sorry for that. Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait to see what their unwanted guest is!
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