|Reviews for The Donor|
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/18
Sorry to point out all of your grammar mistakes but you really need to work on that you need to have them edited just saying not to be rude or anything but I think it would sound a lot better from a reading point of view
| li-spar1 chapter 8 . 11/17/2015
Good story are you going to be finishing it?
| kelley turner chapter 8 . 2/2/2014
white more pleas and thank u so mush this is a great book u white and I love to read more of it
| L4N498 chapter 8 . 8/30/2013
Holy shit I hate Jacob!
| destiny's 3's chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
keep writin more! I love this this one of the greatest stories ive read!
| horsesrules chapter 8 . 8/1/2013
Write more its good
| brandofcullencrazy chapter 8 . 5/4/2013
Wow I really hope you start writing this again. ;)
| g.p chapter 8 . 3/7/2013
can you writes some more plz
| Kathleen chapter 8 . 2/9/2013
Hi like ur story when r u updating this I'd like to know more.
| Taylor9901 chapter 8 . 2/7/2013
This is a really good story. I can't wait for more.
| Postapocalypticdepository chapter 8 . 1/15/2013
I hope the baby is Edward's?!
| Postapocalypticdepository chapter 7 . 1/15/2013
Seriously, wher can I get one of these Edward's.
| Postapocalypticdepository chapter 6 . 1/15/2013
Dun, dun, dun!
| Postapocalypticdepository chapter 3 . 1/15/2013
Where can I find me an Edward like this?
| Postapocalypticdepository chapter 2 . 1/14/2013
Very fast moving but oh so endearing.