Reviews for Not Asleep Survivors Missing Scene |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A very charming missing scene! I've been away from TLW too long. This is a nice story to bring back the mood! Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nicely done. I loved this episode. it was a good one for Marguerite. I love seeing her softer side. and your story had her down nicely. |
![]() ![]() Very nicely written, and closely resembled the characters' personalities in the show. Excellent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very beautiful one-shot! That has to be my favorite episode in the show. So much emotion from both Roxton and Marguerite. Love it! :D |
![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this fiction. Oh, Roxton and Marguerite - the possibilities are endless - and I really miss TLW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw...one of my fav fic author's writes yet another lovely fic of my favorite pair. Well done. I did notice this however: as if she suspected her might mock her clumsiness. - I think maybe you meant "as if she suspected he might mock her clumsiness". Makes me miss them something awful. Thanks for the walk down memory lane. :D |
![]() ![]() excellent; captures the true cat and mouse games between M&R |
![]() ![]() Omg I miss the lost world so much thank you for writting this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, that is so sweet. It warms the cockles of my heart. What a light touch with dialogue and deft hand when creating a scene. The characters are well-represented in their actions and words. You add a little bit of wonderful to the episode and the TLW world with this short fic. sc |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fill in scene. It was a great edition. Also, I loved the gossip between Ned and Veronica on the Margurite/Roxton relationship. I can't imagine that it WASN'T a topic of conversation at some point. Again, loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I truly enjoyed reading this- it felt exactly like an episode ending. You always have their individual voices so wonderfully in character- from Ned and Veronica's awkwardness to Challenger's enthusiasm and smugness, Roxton's optimism and Marguerite's contradictory manner. The way they interact, both one and one and as a family group make this great. I've only just finished and I'm looking forward to reading this again . |
![]() ![]() ![]() It wasn't until I read this story that I realized how little we actually saw the others - Ned and Veronica, and also Finn, in particular - discussing or gossiping about Roxton and Marguerite. And when I read this, I knew I regretted that. I want them to have gossiped a little. And I definately want more of your fics. Nice story. ME |