|Reviews for Glitch|
| blown away chapter 1 . 2/19
holy crap how was this not made into a full story? this is amazing!
i truly hate finding fics and ending up wanting more but knowing it'll never happen.
| DannyK92 chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
it's so beautiful! that's how it should've happened!
| Cammy P chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
I can only wish I had your writing skills. So disturbingly good
| bigicy chapter 1 . 10/2/2015
Great fanfic with an awesome Jameron moment.
Would like to see this story continue...
I see that Missi Marie's TSCC story "Pounce." seems to have been removed off Fanfic.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
i really wanna see cameron get naked
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2015
i just have to say thank you for this and i hope one day you can write more of this because you have a true skill at writing john and cameron.
| justRoman chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
this is by far the best one shot i've seen in a very long time. john/cameron forever!
| Average Joe chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
"Bitch-whores were not allowed near John". Hilarious :) Great work man.
| m1919 chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
First fic I've really read in probably almost two years, this was a great oneshot. Much better than what we got in BTR.
| blasteddead chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
wow... this was fanastic. why haven't you written more for this? I don't understand.
| cameron2027 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
very moving , beautiful ,. very tasteful, no smut there
| lithiummessiah chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
THIS IS LITERALLY THE BEST JOHN AND CAMERON ONE SHOT OUT THERE. I wish there were more to it though.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
this is seriously one of the best fanfics I've ever read. for the life of me i don't understand why it ends where it does. it's too good to be a one shot.
| Righteousham chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
This was quite an extraordinary piece of writing, very highly polished overall.
Writing a sex scene is a delicate balancing act between describing the "action" and delving into the minds of those involved. Fall short on one side and you have porn, fall short on the other and you leave your audience confused as to what exactly happened in the scene. I'm pleased to see you handled it expertly.
A problem that exists in many AU's is why the characters should act any different to a given situation. I thought your use of John's inner voice as the narrator was a good decision and it went a long way to establishing him as a character and why he reacted differently than in the show. I also thought you handled Cameron well when you switched perspectives as she can be very difficult to write convincingly.
I also wish to comment on your dialogue as it felt true and was clearly distinctive to who was speaking it. In far to many stories the only way to tell which character is speaking is to wait until the author spells it out at the end of the sentence. But with you I feel that even if you never mentioned whether it was John or Cameron speaking I would be able to tell just by the way it was written.
I appreciated how you highlighted that Cameron made a choice to sleep with John and how that is not something that is easy or comes naturally to her. I always felt that one of the most significant scenes in the entire show is when Cameron chooses not to kill John, and I was very disappointed that they never really referenced that scene again.
As written this stand as a one-shot, but you've failed to mark it as compete which leads me to believe you had at some point intended to continue. If that is still the case then I urge you to write as this site (and this fandom) needs authors like you. If however, you have lost interest in continuing this story then I ask you to log in simply to mark this as complete so as to end the speculation of fans like myself. As I am now intrigued to see what would have developed in your story had it gone on.
All-in-all, this is a very good story and I'm glad to have found it.