|Reviews for Glitch|
| m1919 chapter 1 . 1/2
First fic I've really read in probably almost two years, this was a great oneshot. Much better than what we got in BTR.
| blasteddead chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
wow... this was fanastic. why haven't you written more for this? I don't understand.
| cameron2027 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
very moving , beautiful ,. very tasteful, no smut there
| lithiummessiah chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
THIS IS LITERALLY THE BEST JOHN AND CAMERON ONE SHOT OUT THERE. I wish there were more to it though.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
this is seriously one of the best fanfics I've ever read. for the life of me i don't understand why it ends where it does. it's too good to be a one shot.
| Righteousham chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
This was quite an extraordinary piece of writing, very highly polished overall.
Writing a sex scene is a delicate balancing act between describing the "action" and delving into the minds of those involved. Fall short on one side and you have porn, fall short on the other and you leave your audience confused as to what exactly happened in the scene. I'm pleased to see you handled it expertly.
A problem that exists in many AU's is why the characters should act any different to a given situation. I thought your use of John's inner voice as the narrator was a good decision and it went a long way to establishing him as a character and why he reacted differently than in the show. I also thought you handled Cameron well when you switched perspectives as she can be very difficult to write convincingly.
I also wish to comment on your dialogue as it felt true and was clearly distinctive to who was speaking it. In far to many stories the only way to tell which character is speaking is to wait until the author spells it out at the end of the sentence. But with you I feel that even if you never mentioned whether it was John or Cameron speaking I would be able to tell just by the way it was written.
I appreciated how you highlighted that Cameron made a choice to sleep with John and how that is not something that is easy or comes naturally to her. I always felt that one of the most significant scenes in the entire show is when Cameron chooses not to kill John, and I was very disappointed that they never really referenced that scene again.
As written this stand as a one-shot, but you've failed to mark it as compete which leads me to believe you had at some point intended to continue. If that is still the case then I urge you to write as this site (and this fandom) needs authors like you. If however, you have lost interest in continuing this story then I ask you to log in simply to mark this as complete so as to end the speculation of fans like myself. As I am now intrigued to see what would have developed in your story had it gone on.
All-in-all, this is a very good story and I'm glad to have found it.
| yetikiller chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Hello Mark, I've reviewed already so I can't post on my account, but I want to say that I reread the story and it's so fun and wonderful to read. It's one of my favorites. It seems like you're not writing tscc fanfics anymore, but I want you to know that I love what you've written here and it's appreciated very much, but I do hope to see more from you in the future. Thank you so very much for everything.
| johnxcameron chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Oh my god! Please tell me you're gonna write more to this. It's literally one of the best fanfics I've read. Please?
| amy chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
I can only say wow right now.
I think this is one of the best fics I've read. Thank you so much!
| alex chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
WOW! One of the most perfect scenes and made even better.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
This is a really amazing fanfiction and I truly love how you have written John and Cameron here. I think this is one of the best short fics I've read. You got me hooked and now I just wish there were more.
| cameronbaumsjacket chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
OMG! Please continue this. It's so amazing.
| xxvoxx chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
I LOVE THIS STORY!
You can tell just how much John and Cameron love one another in this. It's so beautiful! I thought I would let you know that I don't think this should be rated M. This is definitely a T rated story.
| delena231 chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Warnings: Smut (but with a soul).
You're absolutely right. It was one of the most beautifully written fics on the site. I love it, thank you!
| thelexy chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Hello Mark! :)
I just wanted to say that this is the best one shot I have read on this site. The way you write John and Cameron is absolutely beautiful and I'm currently wish that there was more to this. I think you captured what made John and Cameron's relationship so amazing. The emotion between the characters and how both John and Cameron handle what happens is perfect.
I want to thank you for writing this. I have been reading a lot of John and Cameron lately since I rewatched the show.