Reviews for My Stone Cold Heart
SejiADettswic chapter 4 . 7/18/2011
you were right when you said this was seems to me like both of their personalities just completely changed

SejiADettswic chapter 4 . 3/6/2011
Sorry i forgot to say something in my last review: okay, since i'm known for a little constructive criticism i just wanted to say that it would be nice to have an idea about what they look like. I mean i think i know how they appear but u never know until the author tells you, right?

SejiADettswic chapter 4 . 3/6/2011
Hmmm... I like this chapter. Keep going
SejiADettswic chapter 3 . 3/4/2011
okay so this story is moving way to fast. this is they're first conversation? Try taking it ONE step at a time not FIVE. This "high" point needs more of a buildup. give more background

vampireaddict08 chapter 3 . 3/1/2011
Hmmm very interesting so far... Hmmm where to go... You could get layla to get more prey and have jace interrupt and the two of them randomly finding each other whenever Layla walks away from Jace
8U88LY chapter 2 . 2/25/2011
definately update! i really like it :D
Queen Of Dead Hearts chapter 2 . 2/3/2011
It's very different from your past work. Some of your past work was . . . awkward, for lack of a better word. You would give away more background info then neccessary and usually too soon. This is quite different. There is no background info at all. It has a nice poetic element, I will say. Flows tons better then your stuff usually does (no offense, just an observation) but of course I hope they'll be some more . . . story in it. You know, names, events and such. I'm sure you will. And of course, they could be longer these chapters.
Queen Of Dead Hearts chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Edward Cullen stare . . . hehe