|Reviews for Not for Anything: Dark Storm Rising|
| CorruptEnlightenment chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Can't wait to see where you're going with this. You've already kept Harry true to form by making him a right bitch; well done.
| public-enemy27 chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
I'm so glad that you're going to continue this brilliant story. That was an amazing chapter - I liked it that you also put just that little row between James and Harry into it... I only can imagine how difficult times must be for them both. And I hope that the time at Grimmauld Place is at least a little cozy for Harry.
| Christmas1094 chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Please update soon!
| dazzledgreeneyes chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
I always get so excited when you post a new chapter, and I'm never let down! :]
| indaburrow chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Its really interesting so far :) is the main plot going to be on harry's visions and possession or are you going to change it about a bit?
| Dimcairien chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
I was wondering how you were going to get the Muggle bit into there. These stories are really good.
| livin and breathin chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Hey there- so there isn't too much I can say other than the fact that for the past couple months it seems to have happened that I haven't been reading as much fanfiction but today I was just in the mood so I scrolled through my list of e-mails from ff to see if there's anything I'm up to and I see the Not For Anything: Triwizard Tournament. I was reading it from before and had left off just before chapter 29 came out. I read it all and into the sequel for one main reason. It's refreshing. I've gotten so tired of reading the same old tired themes and attempts at show-shopping surprises only for the author to completely miss on the goal of really bringing the feelings back home. When I read your story I really feel the pit of nervous energy in James' gut and the tensions or vibes you're trying to bring across in a room. All the more, it's different for me because in the 7 years that I've been on ff I haven't really read too many stories where only Lily passed away that night. I'm not going to lie, there were times when I thought that Harry was made out to be a little too innocent for his age but I see the evolution that you're trying to bring across and I like the consistency of it throughout all the segments of the story. I also think that the relationships between Harry, Ron, Hermione, and especially Ginny haven't been developed enough but there's definitely time for that to be done and it's evident that you know how to do that through the great characters and relationships that you've brought us through the Marauders.
I'm looking forward to reading more from you
Livin and Breathin 3
p.s. please ignore the run on sentences, I'm too lazy to go back and fix them ;-)
| mrschuckbass10 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
amazing as always! Please don't kill Sirius in this story! I want him to make it until at least the 7th book so he can find out what Regulus did! Please update the marauder's tale!
| LupinandHarry chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Ahh Harry, it's never nice when he's being all moody. Still I understand why he's all upset. James handled it well. LD
| Sara I Have No Profile chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Wow. That was unexpected - Scott Andrews being...nice. Odd.
I like the way James handled Harry's frustration. "Let's take down Voldemort. You and me. Right now. What's your plan?" That was nicely done.
Aw, and it ended on a lighter note after the dementors and moody Harry. :) Good way of ending the chapter!
| TheMunnin chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Aww, moody teenagers brings tears to my eyes (And then I wonder why americans celebrate sweet 16)
I'll warn you kill Sirius... watch your back! I'll be sure to discover where you live (though, considering I don't even know the country, it might be an unconcerning threat)
PS: Yay for the new story!
| Rebel Way chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
I already love this one! You're doing such a great job!
| itravelalone chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
I've been waiting for this story. Great chapter (great stories - I'm hooked!), you give J.K Rowling a run for her money! Can't wait for the next chapter.
| YuuShka chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Finally the 5th part!
You know, swings are also my favorite ... er... what word is that? Ah, never mind. I complitely understand Harry's wanting to go to swings. They really give some illusion of freedom. I don't even try to understand his feelling of a trap, because there has never been anybody after me. But indeed, there were days when I wasn't allowed out of house. It was so damn frustrating!
But my parents would have killed me, if I ever tried to speak with them as Potter-boy spoke with Potter-elder, Xd))).
But I so like this angry Harry! It makes him so real!
Waiting for update))
| Aileen Autarkeia chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Hello! I certainly came in late, didn't I? Good writing style! This is the best and farthest along story I have found so far. Very good job with descriptions and nice long chapters! Long chapters make a bad week bearable. Thank you for updating and keep writing!