Reviews for The More Things Change
Biichi-gi chapter 1 . 5/26
Very well done. I'll have to work my way through the series before I follow this from aught but vague memory but I can certainly ID with the sense of abandonment. My twin deserted me, rather like Kevin but without the strafe of bullets, and all I can the no sometimes is what a thoughtless, callous and uncaring vermin she was. Of course, then I admit I miss her and acknowledged that when your time is up that's all of it, whether you're ready to go or not. Doesn't make it any easier to swallow. I think you got that across perfectly.
Thanks.
Daldove chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Good one! Time line is a bit off (BK happened more then a year after Kevin was killed) but other then that, very good. Very sad too. I can picture Darien feeling that way. Love how Bobby was there for him in the end. :-) Great job! :-D