haha sex jokes haha drinking is so cool

No, it's not.

This story reminded me of a great NaruShi story I read

Lol

Got up to chapter 22. It fell off for me unfortunately

I like the story but it’s hard to follow at times. Feels as if it jumps around a lot

Damnit, where did these tears come from?

Damn!.. I haven't seen a LEMON scene with a pregnant girl.. :D

well not only you are good writer but also a heart crusher. my biggest desire is to have a family with a boy to pass on my knowledge and nature and a girl to dote on but, this chapter broke me

Holy shit bro. Jesus fuck. I was hype and high on the romance and fluff and humor and omfg this is a gut wrencher.. my biggest and greatest desire is to have a daughter and hoooooly shit this hurt to read..I hope there's much more fluff soon I need it

while the descriptions about the alluring parts of women's body in this chapter are exceptional, the author forgot the most important part imo.

face, and the many, many expressions it can offer.

you see 1 beautiful body part on a woman? its highly likely you'll see them again in another woman. and you'll eventually thinkthey're just the same thing on different persons. and you'll get bored with them body parts.

but face? face is the most unique part of any person's body. it can shows the character and soul of the person in every situations ever. for example, just think about this... when a person is sad, do their arms become different than when they're happy? exactly... their arms only show the same default 'we are this person's arms' expression no matter what emotional state its owner is currently feeling.

face is the best part of human bodies.

The writing is top notch.

Thank you. Honestly this was something I needed to read with how my life is right now and I just thank you from the bottom of my heart. It was beautiful and amazing and I only wish that it didn’t have to end. I understand the change but I support you in your future endeavors. Good luck friend and I hope you see happiness as our dear Naruto has

for fucks sake. The part about Hotaru broke me.

Honestly this chapter was a lot of fun I couldn’t stop laughing at naruto’s situation especially his three students I love their interactions especially harumi that girl had me laughing like no tomorrow. but naruto’s relationship with shizune is creepy and disturbing. She is a married woman and a mother the way you made Iruka okay with his wife cheating on him is Disgusting and makes him look like a retard. Also like why shizune couldn’t it have been like Sakura or anko or some one that isn’t a wife/mother.

This made me cry not gonna lie. Well done mate