Okay, first, I hate you. Seriously this is by fair the most tear jerking shit I've ever read, and I've read damn near every note worthy fic on Naruto in this site. Been doing it for years and never before has a story made me cry like that. You are a terrible person for making me feel such profound and unadulterated emotion.
Second, incase you didn't get it, I was being sarcastic. This is a magnificent story, the emotion you portrayed between the characters in both amazingly written, and as a victim of circumstance like these two, genuine. People don't realize how often a love like this happens and it's happened to me. It pleased me like no other to see such words on display for the world. A fine Aurthor you are. Now on to the bad part, while it is well written as with all things there are its flaws. In some of the latter chapters you seemed to jump between past and present, while this isn't necessarily bad it can lead to confusion in many, try and keep that clear and distinguished in future stories and you'll be golden, goodbye and God speed!
-Kurai

i want to know...
is this Yamaguchi-'guy' in Naruto series...
i dun think he is...

Yeah, this tight! i'm a massive naruto X ino fan, thank you for this.

this... i almost hate you for this... it stole my whole night sleep and made me cry 4 times... but in the end i can help but love it... it was great, awesome, a lil simple but fun and sweet

good

Me gusta 9 / 10

It was still funny 9 / 10

I wouldn't have left but it was hard 9 / 10

Jerk 8 / 10

Jerk 6 / 10

Awesome 9 / 10

This is amazing 10 / 10

Dude i love your story and loved the love hina reference 10 / 10

So many amazing and awesome 9 / 10

Awwwwwww man that ending was adorable 9 / 10