Good story, thanks for writing. and in my opinion, even if ino was raped, it would comply with the general story line; then naruto not breaking up with her would show a lot of character. The world isn't perfect, people need to know that and deal with it.

"Happily ever after isn't based on having nothing bad happen in the past, otherwise, there would be no happily ever after."

Ah, the doghouse in this case is his friends house...

Troublesome indeed _

"What did you two do, roll in shit?" Always the tactful in delicate situations, Ino's mother.

"Please forgive my stupidity." He bowed. Wow he was a keeper.

"We're sorry. We're stupid."

ROTFLMAO d(*-*)
I'm glad to see an Update d(*-*) Don't let ppl bring you down.

A Question. Are they sleeping in the same bed? or Ino's mom will make them sleep on separate rooms ?

this story went way down hill ffs there was no need for that you could have tied it up with them finally getting together and an epilogue but no you did that i can understand it can be a powerful tool in some story's used correctly but there was no need for it here.

I wont be reading any future updates to this story, because im disgusted that you would uneccesarilly add that.

i understand your views perfectly and have no qualms with how you wrote the chapter. just sayin

update soon

Hey I just wanted to say that it doesn't matter what orher people say your story is fantastic I understand why you chose to write it like that it moves the story in a different direction and makes it will make you feel for the characters more and that's what is needed...I would have loved it if naruto was the one who killed him but that's just me

I would say that you should ignore what others say and do it your way...you rock

people will always jump to conclusions about something if they dont like it but more then half the time they arent brave enough to write themselves so even though i was upset with what was implied about what would happen in the story that doesnt mean i was upset with you for writing it that way anyways i loved this chapter and how you put in a conversation with their supposed daughter hope you dont stop writing this story or any others just because some people cant handle angst or real life situations in fanfiction

OMG!

Do you have any idea of how scared you mande me?

I tought she was raped! Don't do this again, plz! I can't stand the tought of people being raped in the middle of a romance story. It's too depressing!

Anyway, I think your story is being very well written!

Post the next chapter as quick as you can, plz!

People can be really stupid sometimes. Don't worry about those idiots. I think you're doing an amazing job, I love the story. It's so interesting and funny. While I hate reading about rape, it does happen and to flame the author for just mentioning the possibility is stupid. Let alone questioning the integrity of the author is just an amazing leap in logic that is just beyond silly. I enjoy when you update but perfectly understand that you have to take a break from this. You're doing this for fun and some people are ruining that fun for you. Once again I think that you're doing a great job and I loved the part where Ino got to meet Naruto's little girl. It was very heart warming. Keep up the good work.

:)

Just ignore the people like that. Your story has a great balance instead of hey the looked in each other eyes and blam they're in love. I like this story, and it's one of my favs so I cant wait for more humor ridden I liked the beginning with Ino and Hotaru and yeah that was def the first episode of ER:Konoha.

"This is FAN-FICTION, we will do whatever we want with the characters, We will make the Story our own, Don't like it? Don't read it!"

That's on many Authors Profiles and I Couldn't agree more, after all that's why we are on FF.

Your Story is Amazing, I don't have a problem with your characters, plot, etc. and I think so many reviews (Good and Bad) are proof that your writing is so emotional that can make us feel the characters emotions and more ( Hotaru's Story is a perfect example of how Beautiful your writing is ).

I Hope you understand how many ppl don't do Angst (Their Choice and a respectable one) so perhaps they were expecting something like Love Hina or whatever and I'm not saying It's your Story's fault, No.

I Hope you'll keep writing d(*-*)
You're Amazing

firstly, i agree with the rant at the end of 14. having neer read any of your fictions before, i will admit that the way it came across certainly lead that open as a possiblity, but it seems people have forgotten these are MATURE ratings, and like it or not, this means we have ADULT SITUATIONS. like you said, not all adult situations are "candy pops and roses", there is always a darker side.

secondly, i must congratulaqte you again... having skipped 13 due to a downed network, you sir(or maam if it applies), are an excellent writer. the suspense and the "oh shit!" moment towards the end was amazing, truly, my hats off to you.

thirdly, i hope that you will return to Fakers!, because to lose such a promising story so soon... is a true crime to the readers, and yet, if you choose not to, we had only ourselves to blame.

in closing, i would like to leae you with a standard "keep up the good work" and a quick bit of advice..

"everyone has an opinion about everything, but the only opinion that truly matters is your own" - (i forgot who said it .)

sincerely

DMSeth

PS:

another author said it best, "This is FAN-FICTION, we will do whatever we want with the characters. Don't like it? Don't read it!"

"...he must rape himself..." you rape yourself? is that even possible? i mean not just physically but mentally as well . if you want decided to penetrate yourself wouldn't that mean it was consensual? just a random thought about the AN

(no more ego stroking for you! you already know your story kicks ass P)

*claps

please dont take others who have negative opinions about the story to heart. this is your story and i implore you to write it the way you want to. Many have enjoyed this far, because you have written some preety good shit, pardon my french. Many have to suffer to notice what they have, and clearly naruto and ino are going through this, and so there relationship will if anything become stronger unless Naruto leaves inorder to pretect her. But please, write as you see fit, because for every negative review you recieve, you have 10 others cheering you on. Thank you for such a great story. its about 3am, time to hit the hay, but i thought it would be good to write this, for a postive boost ;)