The concept is good but poorly execute.

Damn you, making me cry. The feels were strong in this one and made me remember my dad.

It was meant for Ch13 btw

You lost me in this chapter, unfortunately I've come across so many stories that start good and then decide to kill what they have going for it with shit like this, won't continue reading, sorry.

I was enjoying this story until I got here, completely unnecessary and tasteless, someone in the reviews already said it, why is it that every time the story is getting a great flow the author fucks it up with rape? Because of this I can't bring myself to read the rest of the story, very tired of seeing Ino or any other kunoichi for that matter, shown as a weak piece of meat, don't get me wrong, you write good, but you lacked imagination here, 1/10, I'm out.

Hotaru was just introduced and I'm already crying

Great story.

I have love hate relationships with fics like these. One one hand, very funny. On the other, I suffer from secondhand embarrassment on an unhealthy level

I've never cried reading a fanfiction before, but chapter 23 really tugged on my heart strings. I cried like a little girl.

but is the dipshit dead

wow this chapter made me cry

This was an amazing story. I love good romance so finding this was a little diamond in the rough for me. I will admit when the tags read humor/romance i was not expecting to cry a few times. Still, beautiful story. I would had liked to have had a scene with the child being born already, or maybe a far future shot.

You are killing me with that little girl

I cried too.

I’m in bed crying over this chapter.