This chapter hurt. Like emotionally. I pride myself in being able to manipulate people emotionally or otherwise, but you take the cake when it comes to emotional manipulation. Good Job. I can only aspire to become as manipulative as you.

omg its over. it was a great ending. i thought at first he was going to propose for real with a ring and all like Monica and Chandler in friends but its still great. youre amazing thank you

this one the feeling was really deep. God i cried again

this story is so good. the fact you said youre almost done is kinda sad but also kinda exciting.

i cant believe you actually did that. i kinda want to see Naruto and Shizune together. i mean in different story cause i like NaruIno and Shizune is married its kinda wrong but its just a fictional story so i dont really care. anyway great chapter

i can feel the tension rising..

that so sad. i cried

i read the top review before i start reading abd it got me interested. its a weird starts but we'll see what happen

Annd I'm done. Once you brought to Council into this by giving them too much "Control" you lost me. He saved the world, there should be fuck all that they can do to him whether he broke a rule or not.

I loved this story up until this chapter. I find what Naruto and Shizune doing, really disgusting. How can Shizune even do that? to cuddle with a man who romantically loves her and who she, romantically loves too when she's married to Iruka... she has a kid. That is just so wrong on so many levels.

bro I cried

I don't know how many times I've read this story over the years, but it's always been one of my absolute favourites, not just fanfiction, but of any fiction. Thank you for the laughs and the tears, it's gotten me through a lot, and I expect I'll be returning again soon enough. 3

this is just god...so funny and so well written, and the jokes about kishimoto, just gold!

Nice job writing. Thee piece about Hotaru was very sad, you did a good job writing something emotive that brought the desired feeling up in those reading your work.

Wow, this chapter was pretty hilarious! A thought that popped up is that working as a person who torturing for a living might make a person slightly wacky.

I also thought the way Inoichi reacted about his girls ganging up on him was similar to the way Ichigo's dad reacted when he is crying to the picture of his wife about his daughters not loivng him, or his son growing up, ect...